for Hard Love8/23/2015 c3 Dalli Dayson
I wonder why Naruto's such an asshole! I hate him right now. I really hope he doesn't rape her and if he does I hope he regrets it for the rest of his life! If that happens then he deserves to live with that guilt. I'm also wondering whether he will hit her or not because at this point its not clear how cruel he's planning to be to her. Guess I'll find out later... Great chapter! I hope you'll update soon please! That goes for your other stories as well! ;)
I wonder why Naruto's such an asshole! I hate him right now. I really hope he doesn't rape her and if he does I hope he regrets it for the rest of his life! If that happens then he deserves to live with that guilt. I'm also wondering whether he will hit her or not because at this point its not clear how cruel he's planning to be to her. Guess I'll find out later... Great chapter! I hope you'll update soon please! That goes for your other stories as well! ;)
8/17/2015 c2 Guest
He's gonna get her all heated up for a full lemon course, isn't he? How long before Hinata surrenders herself to Naruto's
touch?
He's gonna get her all heated up for a full lemon course, isn't he? How long before Hinata surrenders herself to Naruto's
touch?
7/7/2015 c2 Batros940
I'm curious about where Kushina is during this. Also I think it would be nice if later on you have naruto arrange for Hinata to see her mother again.
I'm curious about where Kushina is during this. Also I think it would be nice if later on you have naruto arrange for Hinata to see her mother again.
7/6/2015 c2 
12Arasia
seems interesting so far, can't wait to see how it develops.
one little thing though, is that you tend to have run on sentences. sometimes i need to go back an re-read a sentence to understand it properly. perhaps more punctuation, and some conjoining words would help?
12Arasiaseems interesting so far, can't wait to see how it develops.
one little thing though, is that you tend to have run on sentences. sometimes i need to go back an re-read a sentence to understand it properly. perhaps more punctuation, and some conjoining words would help?
7/6/2015 c2 gummy b3ars
sakura again? or shion?
i know hinata will change him for the better,and not only him but maybe the family too.
good chap
ps: pls put some comma especially in long sentences. the 'thought' of the statement was kinda mixed and confusing when it's not seperated with a '' , '' tnx
sakura again? or shion?
i know hinata will change him for the better,and not only him but maybe the family too.
good chap
ps: pls put some comma especially in long sentences. the 'thought' of the statement was kinda mixed and confusing when it's not seperated with a '' , '' tnx
7/5/2015 c2 truLBfn
I was expecting this to go another way. But this is a good chapter & story. I look forward to seeing where you take this entire thing.
I was expecting this to go another way. But this is a good chapter & story. I look forward to seeing where you take this entire thing.
7/5/2015 c2 karouridley
nossa essa historia esta ficando muito interessante ,e quente também .,continua porfavor...
nossa essa historia esta ficando muito interessante ,e quente também .,continua porfavor...
7/5/2015 c2 Guest
Yay! More naruhina!
The stories had been dry so far.
Please let this be good.
Great job so far! Very good story! Yey for more chapters!
Please write soon. _
Yay! More naruhina!
The stories had been dry so far.
Please let this be good.
Great job so far! Very good story! Yey for more chapters!
Please write soon. _
7/5/2015 c2 deadrose12341234
Minatos gang should be a ploy they should secretly be vigilantes for hire and they are trying tge take down hiashi so they took hinata cause she has info on him anx when hiashi finds out he comes for her so naruto and sasuje have to protect her but sasuke fall for her likr naruto and they fight
Minatos gang should be a ploy they should secretly be vigilantes for hire and they are trying tge take down hiashi so they took hinata cause she has info on him anx when hiashi finds out he comes for her so naruto and sasuje have to protect her but sasuke fall for her likr naruto and they fight