for Skills Kept Secret3/7/2021 c1 PrincessBloodBlossom
This is very interesting! Hope you update it one day soon. Goodbye!:3:)
This is very interesting! Hope you update it one day soon. Goodbye!:3:)
2/10/2017 c1 Wishfull-star
that was a wonderful sequel to Fringeperson's story, I loved it thank you for writing it:)
that was a wonderful sequel to Fringeperson's story, I loved it thank you for writing it:)
6/20/2015 c1 
7Vuurvlieg
Not bad at all! I liked that story a lot an I was personally disappointed that it didn't continue longer. Love the idea of a sequel and so far I like your writing. The only real error I can see that in one of the last scenes of DTS, it was mentioned that Cloud/Zack was redesigning first Tsurugi. It could be that in this chapter that sword is simply not yet complete but since your Zach was searching for a blade it seems that it should have been mentioned. Still, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
7VuurvliegNot bad at all! I liked that story a lot an I was personally disappointed that it didn't continue longer. Love the idea of a sequel and so far I like your writing. The only real error I can see that in one of the last scenes of DTS, it was mentioned that Cloud/Zack was redesigning first Tsurugi. It could be that in this chapter that sword is simply not yet complete but since your Zach was searching for a blade it seems that it should have been mentioned. Still, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!