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10/21/2015 c1 Casperace13
This story gives my heart hope. Thank you for writing it.
6/22/2015 c1 15Lacorra
Aww my heart... poor Emma!
6/22/2015 c1 andria
loved this one shot. I loved how everyone forgave her and were able to get the darkness out of her.
6/21/2015 c1 Guest
This story was so beautiful. Thank you.
6/21/2015 c1 95Sara K M
Hi there.

Always nice to see your name posted.

I'm not sure Emma would hurt her loved ones as the Dark One, at least not physically. After all, Rumple never hurt Baelfire or Belle physically.
Still, Emma and Rumple aren't the same PERSON, and I certainly don't know why she attacked with magic in this story. Minor detail.

Like the way her family supports her after everything she did, and how she knows they still love her.

Love Henry's reaction to Emma and Killian kissing. I see Henry having a different reaction to Emma/Killian than "Grandma and Grandpa" with kissing. With Grandma and Grandpa, he's used to it and...they're kind of his inspiration. With Emma/Killian he's still working on accepting them (especially since the show had him spend most of his time in S4 with Regina). And he reacts like a typical kid his age. "Ewww, kissing!"

Also love the way you have little Snowing moments in all your stories, even if they're not the focus.

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