for Hearts and Minds2/16 c1 Guest
You really should do at least a part 2. This is already one of the best Gravity Falls fanfics I’ve ever read
You really should do at least a part 2. This is already one of the best Gravity Falls fanfics I’ve ever read
11/27/2018 c1 Guest
I need more
I need more
2/14/2018 c1 Guest
I want to read more
I want to read more
9/1/2017 c1 
24gravityfallslover34
nice job making Bill and Pacifica meet for the first time and Preston is such a horrible father figure toward her
24gravityfallslover34nice job making Bill and Pacifica meet for the first time and Preston is such a horrible father figure toward her
3/19/2017 c1 Guest
Continue this, it's a good fic I see much potential, it's very different from all of the countless others I've read, and in a good way... So I do hope that you continue this amazing story.
Continue this, it's a good fic I see much potential, it's very different from all of the countless others I've read, and in a good way... So I do hope that you continue this amazing story.
8/3/2016 c1 5Ur fan
The chapter seems promising. It's well written and the characters are done great. Hope to hear from you soon.
5Ur fanThe chapter seems promising. It's well written and the characters are done great. Hope to hear from you soon.
6/9/2016 c1 Guest
MORE
MORE
3/18/2016 c1 2GravityFallsLover78
This is deep if this Happen on Gravity falls then she would have more time to be herself rather than the person her parents made her out to be .
2GravityFallsLover78This is deep if this Happen on Gravity falls then she would have more time to be herself rather than the person her parents made her out to be .
1/13/2016 c1 B.S
I thought that was pretty good I'm no critique but I think you should do more!
I thought that was pretty good I'm no critique but I think you should do more!
1/11/2016 c1 ThisGuy
Nice.
Nice.
11/29/2015 c1 Guest
This is soooooo good! Please write more!
This is soooooo good! Please write more!
11/28/2015 c1 Efren
Very short
Very short
11/16/2015 c1 Guest
Are you ever going to make a new one?
Are you ever going to make a new one?