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7/26/2015 c1 RavenKing77
Good start to good story, you even drop a facts about something's, not allot of stories do that.
And about the nudity, as long as you don't make it sound pervy, or you know, go FULL detail on IT, it's fine by me.
Anyway I hope you can continue this story it's really good.
6/28/2015 c1 10miceaholic
It was a hood story, and you even threw in a tiny bit of education.
Its true about Billy being a nudist in the books. Frankie kept starting to hug him till she remembers her friend isn't wearing pants.
I like your choice in your characters friend circle, some of my fave characters.
And don't worry about too much nudity, you wrote it clean and non pervy, so it works.
Is this an ongoing story or one shot? either way still good
6/26/2015 c1 Marshman101

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