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9/27/2019 c1 animerule64
Add more chapters please
11/18/2018 c1 D10g3n3s
Good story, but grammar needs a little work.
4/1/2017 c1 jd.minions
So hot the three of them. I love shy Brain I can never find any so thanks for that.
2/8/2017 c1 72-Sha-ra3
Amazing, I love how you gave Brian the devastated past and made him hardcore in the beginning and n you let it be shown how shy and quiet he really is. I just loved this story period, please write more.
8/7/2016 c1 IAmCayj
OK from just the first like 1/4 or 1/5 of this one shot I knew I wouldn't like it. You've tried to create a badazz Brian (and I get the urge to do so, I truly do) but you did a timeline and practically made him the devil incarnate by 18. That's just not realistic. Also, you say Dom and the others were stealing gas... no one gets a cop undercover for that. Jacking trucks like on the movie yeah stealing gas? Never heard of it. There's also a thing called strikes. If Brian had been sent to juvie that many times before he was 18, they would have kept him in juvie and then sent him to prison when he turned 18 ... no releases in between. Also I think lompoc is a prison not a jail. A jail is for like less than a year. a prison is a year and over. there's a lot more that just made this story feel wrong to me but I don't honestly feel like typing that much. I mean no offense with this review but in my opinion i would give this 0 out of 5 stars

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