for Never Losing The Way8/4/2015 c5 
9Knight Of Balance
Loved the new chapter. Definitely my favorite so far, the best part of which was the first part of the chapter, where the day was just starting. That really showed a bit of bonding between the three of them, showing them getting closer and more comfortable with each other. Though the part of a perverted Isshin made me laugh my butt off! And I think you portrayed Ryuko and Satsuki's fight right down to a t. Keep up the good work.
9Knight Of BalanceLoved the new chapter. Definitely my favorite so far, the best part of which was the first part of the chapter, where the day was just starting. That really showed a bit of bonding between the three of them, showing them getting closer and more comfortable with each other. Though the part of a perverted Isshin made me laugh my butt off! And I think you portrayed Ryuko and Satsuki's fight right down to a t. Keep up the good work.
8/2/2015 c2 Guest
Interesting.
Another thing I forgot to mention: Don't make Ryuko out to be some damsel in distress. THAT does not fit her character at all.
Interesting.
Another thing I forgot to mention: Don't make Ryuko out to be some damsel in distress. THAT does not fit her character at all.
8/2/2015 c1 Guest
So long as there's no shipping I'll give this story a shot. I'm sick of shippings pairings whatever the hell they call it cause its been done WAY too much in fanfiction
So long as there's no shipping I'll give this story a shot. I'm sick of shippings pairings whatever the hell they call it cause its been done WAY too much in fanfiction
8/1/2015 c5 Guest
Actually, Ryūko did know the name in the third episode on, because Satsuki did tell her in the second episode altough I can't remember if you had Satsuki reveal bakuzan's name to Ryūko.
Actually, Ryūko did know the name in the third episode on, because Satsuki did tell her in the second episode altough I can't remember if you had Satsuki reveal bakuzan's name to Ryūko.
7/31/2015 c5 Guest
Ok I just noticed that Iori's last name Katsuki is just a change of Satsuki. Is that a plot point?
Ok I just noticed that Iori's last name Katsuki is just a change of Satsuki. Is that a plot point?
7/31/2015 c5 3LightningS9
I liked the home life part too, it's nice to see them just hanging eating Mrs. M's cooking and Senketsu enjoying Iori's ironing a lil too much. The fight was epic too. Now to wait for the next chapter. :)
3LightningS9I liked the home life part too, it's nice to see them just hanging eating Mrs. M's cooking and Senketsu enjoying Iori's ironing a lil too much. The fight was epic too. Now to wait for the next chapter. :)
7/31/2015 c5 7GirthJohnson
Another great chapter, bud!
Ryuko's inner thoughts and feelings were fun to read, and I also enjoyed the little back and forth the three had on the way to school. It made me chuckle.
I also liked the insight on Ryuko and Senketsu's feelings towards each other. It's only really touched on in the show, but you really delved into it here, and it was really cool to read.
I thought the fight was good, and I know how difficult it can be to write scenes such as this one. It was definitely fun reading how Ryuko viewed everything that happened during the fight, and the actual fighting was well written.
I'm looking forward to the next update! Keep up the good work.
7GirthJohnsonAnother great chapter, bud!
Ryuko's inner thoughts and feelings were fun to read, and I also enjoyed the little back and forth the three had on the way to school. It made me chuckle.
I also liked the insight on Ryuko and Senketsu's feelings towards each other. It's only really touched on in the show, but you really delved into it here, and it was really cool to read.
I thought the fight was good, and I know how difficult it can be to write scenes such as this one. It was definitely fun reading how Ryuko viewed everything that happened during the fight, and the actual fighting was well written.
I'm looking forward to the next update! Keep up the good work.