for The Beginning of the END10/31/2024 c3 darthkratos24
Oh this story is so weird to me there's so much ehh and a boat load of cringe but I see a lot of potential and some stuff keeping me reading
Oh this story is so weird to me there's so much ehh and a boat load of cringe but I see a lot of potential and some stuff keeping me reading
10/30/2024 c2 darthkratos24
Ehhh the dialogue is incredible stiff and awkward and cringy as hell in a lot of parts and nasty is using that blade way way to much. One of the appeals of natsu is his fire magic and just punching people, you'd think a kid raised on that would use that over the sword he's had for a day...
Ehhh the dialogue is incredible stiff and awkward and cringy as hell in a lot of parts and nasty is using that blade way way to much. One of the appeals of natsu is his fire magic and just punching people, you'd think a kid raised on that would use that over the sword he's had for a day...
10/30/2024 c1 darthkratos24
Ah! I know I've read a few of your books before but I keep forgetting you constantly put speech marks backwards
Ah! I know I've read a few of your books before but I keep forgetting you constantly put speech marks backwards
6/29/2023 c1 Guest
Mmmm
You made Natsu talk like an middle aged adult
I don’t like that
It’s like if Luffy suddenly did a lecture on proper table manners
Hope he reverts back
I can forgive him being all straight laced on his first kill and a bit after but not all the dang time
Mmmm
You made Natsu talk like an middle aged adult
I don’t like that
It’s like if Luffy suddenly did a lecture on proper table manners
Hope he reverts back
I can forgive him being all straight laced on his first kill and a bit after but not all the dang time
3/28/2023 c3 BoredAsUsual34
happy aka best wing man/ wing cat to exist and tbh i gotta agree with ya on the natsu x erza ship it did make sense lucy not so much... and tbh natsu in cannon should have been smarter in some senses. plus the whole thing with dragonification being stopped because of what their adoptive parents did it makes some sense yes but it is the same as having zero faith in ones child to not fall into madness and just become a mindeless dragon driven by instinct and not like achnoglia but still retraining their personalitiy traits it would be a huge power boost
happy aka best wing man/ wing cat to exist and tbh i gotta agree with ya on the natsu x erza ship it did make sense lucy not so much... and tbh natsu in cannon should have been smarter in some senses. plus the whole thing with dragonification being stopped because of what their adoptive parents did it makes some sense yes but it is the same as having zero faith in ones child to not fall into madness and just become a mindeless dragon driven by instinct and not like achnoglia but still retraining their personalitiy traits it would be a huge power boost
2/10/2023 c8 
4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Awesome work! Enjoyed this. It’s been awhile and I quite enjoyed all this insanity! Lol!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkAwesome work! Enjoyed this. It’s been awhile and I quite enjoyed all this insanity! Lol!
12/17/2022 c7 Guest
Why is it crazy/nonsense to see a flying boat? Blue Pegasus has one.
Why is it crazy/nonsense to see a flying boat? Blue Pegasus has one.