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8/15/2015 c8 4Plastic Raven
Only a minor issue, but I don't really get a "Blaze" vibe from her dialogue here; it sounds a bit generic. Rather than snarky comments and braggadocio, which is more typical of Silver, she's by nature more precise and formal with her words, and when she's confrontational, it's typically in a more humble way - she's not trying to make the other person uncomfortable or fearful, only to express her anger at those she cares about being endangered or hurt.

Anyway, yeah, I'm back. Nuances like this can be hard to notice. Still enjoying the action regardless.
8/3/2015 c15 Christian Wolf27
I am looking forward to book #2.
8/3/2015 c14 Christian Wolf27
I really can't wait until chapter 15.
8/3/2015 c13 Christian Wolf27
It looks like Silver & Blaze needs some major backup.
8/3/2015 c12 Christian Wolf27
Maybe Barry was just doing that to test Silver & Blaze.
8/3/2015 c11 Christian Wolf27
Elec, you have made the biggest mistake ever.
8/3/2015 c10 Christian Wolf27
Bill, get ready for a major butt whooping.
8/3/2015 c9 Christian Wolf27
The freaks are going to lose.
8/3/2015 c8 Christian Wolf27
So far Silver & Blaze foiled 2 of the evil snakes' plans.
8/3/2015 c7 Christian Wolf27
Silver & Blaze, hate to say this but you just got Hoodwinked by Boomer the Shark.
8/3/2015 c6 Christian Wolf27
Perhaps Elec is cool in a way.
8/3/2015 c5 Christian Wolf27
I think that Elec needs a smelly lesson, what do you think?
8/3/2015 c4 Christian Wolf27
Busted!
8/3/2015 c3 Christian Wolf27
What a total hothead.
8/3/2015 c2 Christian Wolf27
Likes like Knuckles, Silver, & Blaze needs some more backup, what do you think?
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