for The Life of Adventure Has Its Price7/22/2015 c4 
15mouse8
Wonderful story! You wrote the action scene very well - which isn't easy to do since the Doctor doesn't really do violence. For the last time I have to say that you do characterization so well. You've captured the characters and their relationships. Great dialog too!
15mouse8Wonderful story! You wrote the action scene very well - which isn't easy to do since the Doctor doesn't really do violence. For the last time I have to say that you do characterization so well. You've captured the characters and their relationships. Great dialog too!
7/22/2015 c3 mouse8
Love the comment about Strax multipurposing the water! Hmm, here I was thinking how nicely you were exploring the aftermath of a terrifying adventure - something we don't see on the screen, and you know there have to be some nightmares in there - and you spring that on me at the end!
Love the comment about Strax multipurposing the water! Hmm, here I was thinking how nicely you were exploring the aftermath of a terrifying adventure - something we don't see on the screen, and you know there have to be some nightmares in there - and you spring that on me at the end!
7/22/2015 c2 mouse8
I don't mean to sound like a broken record, but again excellent character writing. I could really here the individual voices of the Paternoster group!
I don't mean to sound like a broken record, but again excellent character writing. I could really here the individual voices of the Paternoster group!
7/12/2015 c4 14Wondo
The Leader was a fiend. Yes, Androgums are pretty intense!
Clara and the Doctor are delightfully heroic and protective of each other. I enjoy how you've described their relationship.
More please.
14WondoThe Leader was a fiend. Yes, Androgums are pretty intense!
Clara and the Doctor are delightfully heroic and protective of each other. I enjoy how you've described their relationship.
More please.
7/4/2015 c2 Wondo
"Deliciously" detailed. Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Another exciting chapter. Poor Clara, immobilized by fear over the Doctor's fate.
"Deliciously" detailed. Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Another exciting chapter. Poor Clara, immobilized by fear over the Doctor's fate.