for Adas Reborn5/1 c41 kerikheuer.01
the only issue I have regarding you writing that Harry thinks mad eye is Barty crouch is he would have used the map to check
he's a sith he would definitely double check
it's completely inconsistent with your previous writing that Harry would not check who barty crouch is
the only issue I have regarding you writing that Harry thinks mad eye is Barty crouch is he would have used the map to check
he's a sith he would definitely double check
it's completely inconsistent with your previous writing that Harry would not check who barty crouch is
2/21 c12 rishp
this story is making less and less sense to me. the horcrux on the scar is the only reason why i think harry would be this dark in this story. also, when's he going back? its stated in the summary that he returns. its been more than 1/4 of the story at this point and its just confusing. hes evil, but hes not, has AI (essentially) for children, willing to carry out orders for sith which has not helped his goal while having access to jedi records, has a sook about the killing of clones yet kills them himself. probs doesnt matter at this point coz the story is probably abandoned, but damn, wheres it all going?
this story is making less and less sense to me. the horcrux on the scar is the only reason why i think harry would be this dark in this story. also, when's he going back? its stated in the summary that he returns. its been more than 1/4 of the story at this point and its just confusing. hes evil, but hes not, has AI (essentially) for children, willing to carry out orders for sith which has not helped his goal while having access to jedi records, has a sook about the killing of clones yet kills them himself. probs doesnt matter at this point coz the story is probably abandoned, but damn, wheres it all going?
9/5/2024 c5 LongSelfindulgentReviews
You know, I didn’t think of this before, but Dooku famously didn’t think very much of anyone who would use two sabers. If he really thought Harry was apprentice material I think he’d probably not allow him to focus on a two saber fighting style.
You know, I didn’t think of this before, but Dooku famously didn’t think very much of anyone who would use two sabers. If he really thought Harry was apprentice material I think he’d probably not allow him to focus on a two saber fighting style.
8/11/2024 c15 Romodhg
Im sure this has come up a few times but opening credits say in a time long ago and far away, so starwars takes place in the our past. The author responces seam to be saying not the case.
Im sure this has come up a few times but opening credits say in a time long ago and far away, so starwars takes place in the our past. The author responces seam to be saying not the case.
8/3/2024 c41 WillowoftheOak07
Harry didn’t lose to Cedric due to dementors this time around because he averted the buck beak incident with Malfoy which originally caused the schedule to be swapped around because of slytherin’s injured seeker.
Harry didn’t lose to Cedric due to dementors this time around because he averted the buck beak incident with Malfoy which originally caused the schedule to be swapped around because of slytherin’s injured seeker.
7/21/2024 c43 LtKettch
This is an incredible story. Very entertaining. I really hope you are able to continue it. Thanks for writing and sharing.
This is an incredible story. Very entertaining. I really hope you are able to continue it. Thanks for writing and sharing.
6/27/2024 c28 Ragnar
Is Omega dead?
Is Omega dead?
3/20/2024 c43 DublinChaos
I thought Shaklebolt died during the Quiddich World Cup attack with Robards? Anyway I hope to read the next chapter of this fascinating story soon.
I thought Shaklebolt died during the Quiddich World Cup attack with Robards? Anyway I hope to read the next chapter of this fascinating story soon.