for Youth Novels11/22/2017 c8 
1Blackbearcub12
I’m not sure if you’ve fully given up on this story or if you even check up on it but I just want to say that you’re a really amazing writer. I loved reading every chapter and the interactions between all the characters, not just between the Breakfast Club and the couples within, but also with the inclusion of other characters from Hughes’ movies. I’m so happy that you wrote this, although it is in its incomplete form, and that I could stumble across it to read it. It’s truly been an adventure and I’d like to thank you immensely for that.
1Blackbearcub12I’m not sure if you’ve fully given up on this story or if you even check up on it but I just want to say that you’re a really amazing writer. I loved reading every chapter and the interactions between all the characters, not just between the Breakfast Club and the couples within, but also with the inclusion of other characters from Hughes’ movies. I’m so happy that you wrote this, although it is in its incomplete form, and that I could stumble across it to read it. It’s truly been an adventure and I’d like to thank you immensely for that.
8/7/2017 c8 Shvestaa
I'm sure this story is long abandoned and I don't know if you even use this site anymore, but I want you to know that I haven't enjoyed a Breakfast club fanfiction as much as I've enjoyed this one. Your interpretations of the characters are just so real and lifelike- you give enough detail for them to have 3D personalities and textures, but use the source material artfully to keep them true. Excellently done! A simply lovely read.
Also, in pure shipping trash terms, I LOVE your Claire and Bender. I love all the emotion you put into it and how you write them as rational actors - no stupid misunderstandings as plot devices. They're contentious and bellicose but they interact as a unit, not two separate parts... does that make any sense?
I'm sure this story is long abandoned and I don't know if you even use this site anymore, but I want you to know that I haven't enjoyed a Breakfast club fanfiction as much as I've enjoyed this one. Your interpretations of the characters are just so real and lifelike- you give enough detail for them to have 3D personalities and textures, but use the source material artfully to keep them true. Excellently done! A simply lovely read.
Also, in pure shipping trash terms, I LOVE your Claire and Bender. I love all the emotion you put into it and how you write them as rational actors - no stupid misunderstandings as plot devices. They're contentious and bellicose but they interact as a unit, not two separate parts... does that make any sense?
5/16/2017 c8 Lizard
Fantastic fic! Excellent characterisation, and the writting is flowing and funny and smart as a whip. You are so talented! I hope you'll continue this story, can't wait to read more!
Fantastic fic! Excellent characterisation, and the writting is flowing and funny and smart as a whip. You are so talented! I hope you'll continue this story, can't wait to read more!
12/23/2016 c8 Guest
I've been binging on fics for the last week or so since I rewatched the movie recently and this has been one of the best ones I've read so far. I hope you continue it someday. The characterization is spot on. I really enjoyed it.
I've been binging on fics for the last week or so since I rewatched the movie recently and this has been one of the best ones I've read so far. I hope you continue it someday. The characterization is spot on. I really enjoyed it.
10/11/2016 c1 CaptainSideEyes
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Oh my gosh! This is so good! You captured the characters perfectly! The things John says sound just like the movie version. How he car surfs and gets the Shayne's jeep. Johns friends are perfect. They way Allison acts is perfect. I was freaking out at how sweet John is with Allison! And how he truly befriends Brian. I literally laughed at the the pad on Johns sunglasses and him pretending to be blind. I just love all of it. I've read many a Breakfast Club fanfic, well many from many fandoms, and never have I read something that captures the characters more exactly and elegantly than this!
Please update! I NEED to know what happens!
Review
Oh my gosh! This is so good! You captured the characters perfectly! The things John says sound just like the movie version. How he car surfs and gets the Shayne's jeep. Johns friends are perfect. They way Allison acts is perfect. I was freaking out at how sweet John is with Allison! And how he truly befriends Brian. I literally laughed at the the pad on Johns sunglasses and him pretending to be blind. I just love all of it. I've read many a Breakfast Club fanfic, well many from many fandoms, and never have I read something that captures the characters more exactly and elegantly than this!
Please update! I NEED to know what happens!
5/25/2016 c8 supercut.mp3
please continue! this is the most realistic, accurate and just plain true "what happened after..." story I've read. the characters are unbelievably true to their character and your writing is flawless. you leave me on the edge of my chair. I'll be waiting for a new chapter!
please continue! this is the most realistic, accurate and just plain true "what happened after..." story I've read. the characters are unbelievably true to their character and your writing is flawless. you leave me on the edge of my chair. I'll be waiting for a new chapter!
5/21/2016 c8 Kat
I am enjoying this immensely! Very mature and relatable writing style with a fresh plot idea. Color me impressed. :)
I am enjoying this immensely! Very mature and relatable writing style with a fresh plot idea. Color me impressed. :)
4/13/2016 c8 danielrichardsoo5
Amazing, brilliant stuff. Just wanted to know if you'd be writing a bit more about Andrew and Brian, i feel like they've been left out quite a bit.
Amazing, brilliant stuff. Just wanted to know if you'd be writing a bit more about Andrew and Brian, i feel like they've been left out quite a bit.
12/24/2015 c8 Somefan
Yo im really enjoying this fic it's very god
Yo im really enjoying this fic it's very god
11/24/2015 c7 Gemmasshadow
I love reading this did, fun and cracks me up. Awesome work. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
I love reading this did, fun and cracks me up. Awesome work. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
11/9/2015 c6 Froggette
Well, I really enjoyed this new chapter... as much as I enjoyed the other chapters. Keep on the great work, this story is fun to read, interesting and I love how you mix up and fuck up (a little bit) John Hugues' universe and characters.
Well, I really enjoyed this new chapter... as much as I enjoyed the other chapters. Keep on the great work, this story is fun to read, interesting and I love how you mix up and fuck up (a little bit) John Hugues' universe and characters.
10/22/2015 c5 Guest
I love this story please keep writing i want to know if Allison will ever get any more friends btw you are an amazing writer ,Your biggest Fan Peri
I love this story please keep writing i want to know if Allison will ever get any more friends btw you are an amazing writer ,Your biggest Fan Peri
10/21/2015 c1 Guest
I loved it you are an amazing writer and so imaginative thank you for breaking the relationship with Claires friends if you can call them that they are bitches
I loved it you are an amazing writer and so imaginative thank you for breaking the relationship with Claires friends if you can call them that they are bitches
10/6/2015 c4 5Miss Mello
LOVED this! Half the time I read fanfics for laughs but once in a while you stumble over one that's actually good! I'm hoping for a new chapter soon!
5Miss MelloLOVED this! Half the time I read fanfics for laughs but once in a while you stumble over one that's actually good! I'm hoping for a new chapter soon!