for Youth Novels10/5/2015 c4 bobbie mcgee
Just checking to see if you've written another wonderful chapter yet. Hope to see it soon!
Just checking to see if you've written another wonderful chapter yet. Hope to see it soon!
8/14/2015 c3 Summer Lotus
This series is just brilliant! I can't wait to read more.
This series is just brilliant! I can't wait to read more.
8/12/2015 c3 
1helinahandcart
Oh how I have missed you. Fabulush chapter loved all of it especially finding out more about the Benders more more more please like now :)
1helinahandcartOh how I have missed you. Fabulush chapter loved all of it especially finding out more about the Benders more more more please like now :)
8/9/2015 c2 Bobbie McGee
Please don't leave us hanging out here to dry. Great beginning, very creative and truly entertaining. We'd sure appreciate your continuing this delightful story of yours. More, please!
Please don't leave us hanging out here to dry. Great beginning, very creative and truly entertaining. We'd sure appreciate your continuing this delightful story of yours. More, please!
8/3/2015 c2 2yesterdays.forever
Seems like its a super good story so far! Can't wait for the next update! :)
2yesterdays.foreverSeems like its a super good story so far! Can't wait for the next update! :)
8/2/2015 c2 Brittany
This is fantastic!
This is fantastic!
7/23/2015 c2 Guest
I feel like I'm watching the ultimate John Hughes film in my head.
I feel like I'm watching the ultimate John Hughes film in my head.
7/23/2015 c2 Dreaming2BAWriter
I really like how you put different characters from John Hughes movies in one story. It's kind of like how John Hughes had put all of these characters in one primary setting in his movies; "Shermer", Illinois. It's been said that all these characters exist in one town and universe, the fact that you're doing that is pretty cool! Keep it up, I'd love to see some of the characters interact with Ferris (I'd get a good kick out of that!)
I really like how you put different characters from John Hughes movies in one story. It's kind of like how John Hughes had put all of these characters in one primary setting in his movies; "Shermer", Illinois. It's been said that all these characters exist in one town and universe, the fact that you're doing that is pretty cool! Keep it up, I'd love to see some of the characters interact with Ferris (I'd get a good kick out of that!)
7/17/2015 c1 Bobbie Mcgee
Quite delightful! Looking forward to much more.
Just one little thing that irritates me. John Bender never used the word "ain't". I think it sneaks into some of these fanfics because he's the from-the-other-side-of-the-tracks character. But he never used the word. He may be from the other side of the tracks by birth, but by intelligence and self-education he's very much propelling himself forward into his very own future. And we're all rooting for him every inch of the way.
Enjoying this story very much. Again, looking forward to much more.
Quite delightful! Looking forward to much more.
Just one little thing that irritates me. John Bender never used the word "ain't". I think it sneaks into some of these fanfics because he's the from-the-other-side-of-the-tracks character. But he never used the word. He may be from the other side of the tracks by birth, but by intelligence and self-education he's very much propelling himself forward into his very own future. And we're all rooting for him every inch of the way.
Enjoying this story very much. Again, looking forward to much more.
7/17/2015 c2 1helinahandcart
So pleased you've updated I love this story. Your writing is really strong, good flow,storyline,characterisation and is interesting really can't wait for more. I also love and enjoy that it is Bendercentric and the chapters are long keep it up xx
1helinahandcartSo pleased you've updated I love this story. Your writing is really strong, good flow,storyline,characterisation and is interesting really can't wait for more. I also love and enjoy that it is Bendercentric and the chapters are long keep it up xx
7/1/2015 c1 MrInyo
Dude or Dudette, I love the way you write the characters and actually keep them in character instead of going the route of most writers and making them OOC. Very impressive start and can not wait for the next chapter. Followed and Favorited.
Dude or Dudette, I love the way you write the characters and actually keep them in character instead of going the route of most writers and making them OOC. Very impressive start and can not wait for the next chapter. Followed and Favorited.
6/30/2015 c1 3Toxic-Chi
So there I was, browsing through some AHS fanfaction, and I run into your Violate story. I'm short on time or I would elaborate, but let's just skip to the tl;dr version and say it was effing amazing. Truly wonderful. And then I'm in the mood for some John Bender sass and I notice you had one and it was added only an hour ago! Is this fate?! I think so! Seriously though, I'm in love with your writing style and I'm definitely following this story. Kudos. :)
3Toxic-ChiSo there I was, browsing through some AHS fanfaction, and I run into your Violate story. I'm short on time or I would elaborate, but let's just skip to the tl;dr version and say it was effing amazing. Truly wonderful. And then I'm in the mood for some John Bender sass and I notice you had one and it was added only an hour ago! Is this fate?! I think so! Seriously though, I'm in love with your writing style and I'm definitely following this story. Kudos. :)