for You Betrayed Us7/1/2015 c1 Guest
he should have shot arvo first.
he should have shot arvo first.
7/1/2015 c1 Guest
Yes mike dead
Yes mike dead
7/1/2015 c1 
3guts-and-angel-cake
This is really well-written, I'm surprised it's only your second story. Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
3guts-and-angel-cakeThis is really well-written, I'm surprised it's only your second story. Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
7/1/2015 c1 Legendary Drifter Charles
You actually wrote great for it being your second story, I think all the creativity from this site rubbed off on you. Dang it why did it have to be Mike, out of everyone in that group he was my favorite. I think what he did in the game was pretty OOC, I mean I expected Bonnie and Arvo to just leave AJ and Clem without supplies, but Mike just saved Clem just a day ago (or a couple of days depending on your choice, not that it mattered anyway) so I didn't except him to just go and do that. I mean before episode 5 everybody loved him, we even called him Lee 2.0 lol. Wow got way off-topic here, sorry for that little rant, anyway I thought this was going to be a one-shot but how much chapters do you plan on writing for this? Great stuff can't wait for the next chapter.
You actually wrote great for it being your second story, I think all the creativity from this site rubbed off on you. Dang it why did it have to be Mike, out of everyone in that group he was my favorite. I think what he did in the game was pretty OOC, I mean I expected Bonnie and Arvo to just leave AJ and Clem without supplies, but Mike just saved Clem just a day ago (or a couple of days depending on your choice, not that it mattered anyway) so I didn't except him to just go and do that. I mean before episode 5 everybody loved him, we even called him Lee 2.0 lol. Wow got way off-topic here, sorry for that little rant, anyway I thought this was going to be a one-shot but how much chapters do you plan on writing for this? Great stuff can't wait for the next chapter.
7/1/2015 c1 OmnitrixWielder1124
Awesome! I liked Mike, but im kinda glad hes gone because he extremely pissed me off! And Bonnie! Fuck you Bonnie, piece of shit traitor. Arvo! Lets not forget Arvo! How dare he? I hope he dies! Good job on your first chapter of this, i loved it. Keep up the good work
Awesome! I liked Mike, but im kinda glad hes gone because he extremely pissed me off! And Bonnie! Fuck you Bonnie, piece of shit traitor. Arvo! Lets not forget Arvo! How dare he? I hope he dies! Good job on your first chapter of this, i loved it. Keep up the good work