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2/25/2016 c7 28Kairan1979
Your Naruto is too much like his canon self. I hope you'll add more changes during the Chuunin exam.
1/10/2016 c6 JustADamFrenchFr
I really enjoyed this story, I hope you update again really soon. The small plot twists to the original plot make this story very interesting to read. Please don't give up on this story, and update soon.
10/7/2015 c6 16Duesal Bladesinger
Nicely done.
8/18/2015 c3 Account have been delect
Too much cannon naruto in this fic
8/18/2015 c2 Account have been delect
Too nice
8/18/2015 c1 Account have been delect
Cool chap lady
8/17/2015 c5 9Jewelie-chan
Poor Naruto! I just wanna hug the little guy to death! Keep up the good work! Dftba! :)
8/17/2015 c2 5neruko mika
This has potential, and I like it! Keep writing.
7/1/2015 c1 9Jewelie-chan
This has the potential to be really cool. So far the writing style is nice and fluid, but you need to remember to reread your work to properly capitalize your words. Also I think you should try to add more details in your character's conversations. I can't wait to read more from you! Dftba! :)

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