for Marauders: Year Three7/25/2016 c6 
1Maddy17171717
This is absolutely hilarious. It's giving me whiplash though, going from crying to laughing. I'm getting so confused with my emotions. Are you going to continue this series? I hope you do, they're really good, but if you're not, could you just tell us? I hope you do continue, but if you're not, then I'd like to know.
1Maddy17171717This is absolutely hilarious. It's giving me whiplash though, going from crying to laughing. I'm getting so confused with my emotions. Are you going to continue this series? I hope you do, they're really good, but if you're not, could you just tell us? I hope you do continue, but if you're not, then I'd like to know.
7/25/2016 c5 Maddy17171717
Yay they're finally going to get their name! I honestly hate Baines so much. It sucks that he's a fictional character, cause I'd love to beat the crap out of him.
Yay they're finally going to get their name! I honestly hate Baines so much. It sucks that he's a fictional character, cause I'd love to beat the crap out of him.
7/25/2016 c4 Maddy17171717
I hate him too, but he is realistic, because , let's be honest, not everyone was going to be fully accepting of Remus. It like Umbridge. You hate her, but she's realistic.
I hate him too, but he is realistic, because , let's be honest, not everyone was going to be fully accepting of Remus. It like Umbridge. You hate her, but she's realistic.
7/25/2016 c2 Maddy17171717
That was so sad, Sirius made me cry. I knew he wouldn't be good about letting the others help him. Probably sees it as a sign of weakness.
That was so sad, Sirius made me cry. I knew he wouldn't be good about letting the others help him. Probably sees it as a sign of weakness.
7/25/2016 c1 Maddy17171717
Oh my gosh, what's wrong with Sirius! This is really good, especially considering it's the first chapter.
Oh my gosh, what's wrong with Sirius! This is really good, especially considering it's the first chapter.
6/16/2016 c1 Aleia Night
Aaaahhhhhh please update! I know life happens and people get busy, but could you at least write some sort of update saying whether you're planning on continuing this story someday?
Anyways, I love your writing style, it's very captivating. I've read some of your other stories (I especially loved The Green Eyed Delinquent) and I think you're an amazing writer who'll go far. And congrats for getting into the creative writing school! I knew you would :)
I love how you describe all of the characters in this story, nice round characters for Remus and Sirius especially. However, maybe you could round James a little bit more? And Peter is a very flat character so far, I know he's kinda shy and everything but it might make the story a little more well rounded if he makes a little progress in his character too.
Oh my god, I so need to know what happens next! How do they come up with their name? How does James get the girl? How and when do they become Animagi? What kind of person is Baines going to turn out to be? (Love his character by the way; do I see a teacher-student 'bromance' blooming up between him and Sirius? That'd be awesome!) All the conflict is awesome, the characters are fun and interesting, and the writing is brilliant. Do you see now why you need to continue? ;)
Aaaahhhhhh please update! I know life happens and people get busy, but could you at least write some sort of update saying whether you're planning on continuing this story someday?
Anyways, I love your writing style, it's very captivating. I've read some of your other stories (I especially loved The Green Eyed Delinquent) and I think you're an amazing writer who'll go far. And congrats for getting into the creative writing school! I knew you would :)
I love how you describe all of the characters in this story, nice round characters for Remus and Sirius especially. However, maybe you could round James a little bit more? And Peter is a very flat character so far, I know he's kinda shy and everything but it might make the story a little more well rounded if he makes a little progress in his character too.
Oh my god, I so need to know what happens next! How do they come up with their name? How does James get the girl? How and when do they become Animagi? What kind of person is Baines going to turn out to be? (Love his character by the way; do I see a teacher-student 'bromance' blooming up between him and Sirius? That'd be awesome!) All the conflict is awesome, the characters are fun and interesting, and the writing is brilliant. Do you see now why you need to continue? ;)
4/30/2016 c6 Gallifreyan Cat
I love your story so far! You have an awesome writing style and it reminds me A LOT of J K Rowling! I also love it how you made the marauders so loyal!
I also read your Bio and I just want to say that Catholics rock and I'm a proud Cathlic too!
Keep writing!
- Gallifreyan Kitten
I love your story so far! You have an awesome writing style and it reminds me A LOT of J K Rowling! I also love it how you made the marauders so loyal!
I also read your Bio and I just want to say that Catholics rock and I'm a proud Cathlic too!
Keep writing!
- Gallifreyan Kitten
4/27/2016 c6 Guest
Im sure you have your reasons but UPDATE NOWWWWWWW
Im sure you have your reasons but UPDATE NOWWWWWWW
4/14/2016 c6 Guest
Please please please continue!
Please please please continue!
3/30/2016 c6 Spunkin1
I love it! Your OC Professor Baines is fantastic! He is introducing just the right amount of tension and conflict, but there are hints that he might not be all bad... Was that a concerned look for Sirius after he faced the boggart? I love James' hopeless crush on Lily, and also love that it is not dominating the story. I can't wait to see how the boys find their nickname. I hope you are still planning to continue this. It is wonderful writing!
I love it! Your OC Professor Baines is fantastic! He is introducing just the right amount of tension and conflict, but there are hints that he might not be all bad... Was that a concerned look for Sirius after he faced the boggart? I love James' hopeless crush on Lily, and also love that it is not dominating the story. I can't wait to see how the boys find their nickname. I hope you are still planning to continue this. It is wonderful writing!
3/21/2016 c6 25cherrishish
Are you going to continue this? Please say that you are... if not is it up for adoption?
25cherrishishAre you going to continue this? Please say that you are... if not is it up for adoption?
3/21/2016 c2 cherrishish
okay my only question: if this is July then how the hell there won't be another full moon before the term starts? it felt like in the second year start too, that there should have been another full moon but Remus just went from the Potters to Hogwarts. Or did he go home in between? I'm confused
okay my only question: if this is July then how the hell there won't be another full moon before the term starts? it felt like in the second year start too, that there should have been another full moon but Remus just went from the Potters to Hogwarts. Or did he go home in between? I'm confused
2/9/2016 c6 Guest
Love it! You should update it!
Love it! You should update it!