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3/19/2017 c14 72DrawnToDarkness
Eeeep! He's a nasty piece of work, isn't he?!

But yay for Becker being on the case where Jess's location is concerned - and I cheered out loud when Lester mentioned he'd put a tracker on her phone! GO, LESTER!

Love that Jess is still doing her part, too, even though she's not there - both with her hacking skills and with leaving the bracelet for Matt.

This team will forever be my favourite team - and your stories are helping fuel that even though my own Primeval muse has deserted me! I'm hoping once I've caught up with the original ideas in my head I'll have a chance to return to our lovely characters, but I can't see it happening anytime soon! So thank you, so very much, for keeping my Primeval happy place alive and well - I need it quite regularly!
3/18/2017 c14 41WorldofImagination18
I knew it! I knew Willhauer was dodgy! Now we just need Jess to come in and save the day, and for Becker to stop being an idiot and kiss her!
3/2/2017 c13 72DrawnToDarkness
Heeeeeeeeeeee! Firstly, I apologise for the delay in reviewing - I didn't get a notification that you'd updated.

Secondly, oh my gosh, GO TEAM GO! I love that they're all 'on the case' and trying to figure out what's happened - and I laughed at Abby telling Becker to use his nonexistent people skills.. Teehee!

Also love how they're all eager to get Jess back - not just because of the errors but because they know her worth.

Can't wait for the next chapter - and I'll wait as long as it takes, rest assured I'm not going anywhere! :)
3/1/2017 c13 salwyn77
Yeah, you're back! Thank you for another great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one!
2/28/2017 c13 5AngelfromBeyondBelow
Aww, only 2 more chapters? I can't wait to see how the team deal with Willhauer and Monica. Nor can I wait until they find Jess and their reactions to what she did (here's hoping for more Jecker! *crosses fingers)
2/28/2017 c13 Guest
Welcome back, thanks for the update and please tell us soon what it is Lester knows!
2/28/2017 c13 33Cengiz
hey, an update :D thank you! that chapter was awesome! I didn't even have to re-read the previous chapters to know what it was about. I don't like that Ethan wimp, he's annoying. And I'm glad that the team got together and is going to do something about that. The ARC is at stake :D

and congratulations to your new job assignment, and no apologies needed. I know how it is when you don't have the time, or the energy, or the right brain to write stories. I'm glad you've updated :D great stories need time, and yours is one of them.

have a nice week, and happy writing :D

:o)
2/27/2017 c13 41WorldofImagination18
Fnally they realised something is up. Hopefully Becker will actually tell Jess how he feels as well
10/7/2016 c12 72DrawnToDarkness
:(

:( :( :(

Poor Jess! She's breaking my heart, she really really is. (And while that could be because of real life stuff at the moment, I'm more inclined to believe it's because I just feel so very sorry for her because of the way you're writing this. Meanie. ;))

However, I am so very pleased Becker (and ABby) are on the case and know there's something amiss with their (former *sob*) Field Co-ordinator. Good luck to them in figuring it out!

I now want chocolate. Or at least someone like Becker in my life to sneak a bar of chocolate into my bag. Hmm.

More soon, please!
10/7/2016 c12 33Cengiz
yaaaaaaay you've updated :D

good to read that abby and becker are determine to find out what's going on.

and poor Jess, I just want to hug her right now :(
10/6/2016 c12 41WorldofImagination18
Awww poor Jess! Hopefully Becker will find her snd sort everything out. By that i meanget her job back and kiss her again!
10/6/2016 c11 5Prawn Crackers
Whoah what a brilliant chapter!

Bless you for Abby's sharp obaerving mind and analytical skills!

And Connor's cluelessness made me smile! :)

That Ethan dude should be put with the Terror Birds. Or Future Predators, ha!

The Jess-Lester hug awwww!

But really THE JECKER-KISS! Followed by instant HEARTBREAK! Promise me you'll make them feel happy again (and us...)

I'm afraid Becker will shoot someone soon otherwise...
9/19/2016 c11 Aeryn Levia
I am seriously loving this story! I like that there was an awesome kiss, but it didn't immediately resolve the angst or the still-needs-to-happen relationship. I'm already sad this story will be wrapping up soon!
9/17/2016 c11 72DrawnToDarkness
Oh.

OH.

I have so much love for this chapter... Okay, so poor Becker might have to suffer a bit but Jess has been suffering for longer so I can put up with that.

I love his protectiveness of her. I love Abby's thought pattern that there has to be more to it; she wouldn't just leave the job she loves (or the man she loves) for more money. I L-O-V-E Jess and Lester's goodbye. And I love, love, love, LOVE Jess and Becker's 'goodbye' kiss though I am hoping that it will be their first of many kisses in the end...

Matt is lovely, too, in his defence of Jess, and Connor, too.

Gah. I love this. I am both sad and happy that you're hoping to wrap it up because I want to know how it's going to go but at the same time, I love your stories and don't want it to end... That said, since I know you're working on something else... *happy smile* I can live with it.

Love it, in case that isn't obvious already! x
9/17/2016 c11 6writtinginthedark
I was so happy when Becker kissed her, then he had to go an retreat...frustrating (but in the best way possible). Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm really looking forward to Becker learning the truth and seeing how he copes with Jess gone. Good job :)
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