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7/1/2016 c8 41WorldofImagination18
OOOOOOHHHH!
3/4/2016 c7 33Cengiz
ok, I tried it. I really did. But after that day, and what happened shortly before, and now your chapter. You, my dear, have me crying, right here, right now.

:(

(great chapter nevertheless, but please update)
and get well soon to your family, I hope you and all are well.
3/1/2016 c7 5Prawn Crackers
This is such a heartbreaker!

The interaction between Jess and Lester was awesome though! They way she sees through his sarcastic mask is fabulous!

I dread the next chapter...poor Becker! Poor team! *shakes fist at ministerial morons*
2/24/2016 c7 72DrawnToDarkness
Oh. My heart's breaking, too, for Jess and Lester and for the no doubt painful conversation that's coming between Jess and Becker...

... I love this story so much, and you know I'll always be here to read it! *hugs*
1/3/2016 c6 5Prawn Crackers
Ah yes... Becker having a shower... mmmhh where was I again?

Nice reference to Trump!

And poor Jess' optimism is to receive a severe blow! :-(

And did I mention Becker in the shower is a very gorgeous image. Jess should definitely join him there. :-)
1/2/2016 c6 72DrawnToDarkness
How did I not know this had been posted?!

I love Becker going bright red at Abby's suggestion they get clean together! Teehee!

But no... I'm not ready for Jess to hear Lester's bad news.. Poor girl :( (Though I'm totally ready to see the others leap to her defence *ahem*Becker*ahem*)

I hope the family illness has now passed and all are starting 2016 healthy and well! xx
12/29/2015 c6 4Chloe.661
Poor Jess. Poor Lester too. He always did have a hard job in the end.

Loved the Jecker moments :D Who didn't lol? Written beautifully and I can't wait for the next chapter ;)

Hope you had a wonderful Christmas
Chloe
12/27/2015 c6 33Cengiz
Well said Emily, very well said! :D

Oh dear, poor Jess, doesn't know what will come now :(

great chapter! It was worth waiting for :D and don't worry, better a late update than no update at all :D

:o)
12/3/2015 c5 Cengiz
hahaha yeah, Abby is right. knock some sense into that woman, well maybe from now on, she will believe :D

great chapter :D can't wait for the next one
11/23/2015 c5 5Prawn Crackers
Nice bit of action with Becker to the rescue...

Love Abby's sarcasm! :-)

And Jess, of course, saved the day!

Happy, happy, happy to hear that you have already written two more chapters! Yay!
11/18/2015 c5 4Chloe.661
Loved it. I really liked the joke about Beckers clothing lol.
11/18/2015 c5 72DrawnToDarkness
Ooh, lucky Tanya.. having our lovely Captain there to catch her!

Love the description of the action and their taking down of the dinosaur - and, of course, Jess being the brilliant life saver that she is!

Lovely to see a new part - you know I'm always happy to see you post!
10/16/2015 c4 DrawnToDarkness
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!

I don't like the protester woman at all.. If you want to have Tanya eaten by a dinosaur, that's totally okay with me!

I'm on tenterhooks waiting for Jess to find out her job's at risk - my poor girl! - but am looking forward to the team's reaction to it all, too.

Love the story, m'dear! Any time you're ready to post a part is more than fine by me! I can be patient... sometimes! ;)
10/11/2015 c4 5Prawn Crackers
Paleo propaganda! LoL

Becker is way too professional to let this crazy lady be eaten - unfortunately. But then on second thought, Abby would agree that a polyester pushup bra isn't the right kind of diet for any dinosaur.

I'm happy to see our brainstorming put to such fabulous use!
10/11/2015 c4 33Cengiz
Geez, that woman. Please let her be eaten in the next chapter :D

great chapter. Can't wait for the next one :D

:o)
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