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7/1/2016 c8 41WorldofImagination18
3/4/2016 c7 33Cengiz
ok, I tried it. I really did. But after that day, and what happened shortly before, and now your chapter. You, my dear, have me crying, right here, right now.


(great chapter nevertheless, but please update)
and get well soon to your family, I hope you and all are well.
3/1/2016 c7 5Prawn Crackers
This is such a heartbreaker!

The interaction between Jess and Lester was awesome though! They way she sees through his sarcastic mask is fabulous!

I dread the next chapter...poor Becker! Poor team! *shakes fist at ministerial morons*
2/24/2016 c7 72DrawnToDarkness
Oh. My heart's breaking, too, for Jess and Lester and for the no doubt painful conversation that's coming between Jess and Becker...

... I love this story so much, and you know I'll always be here to read it! *hugs*
1/3/2016 c6 5Prawn Crackers
Ah yes... Becker having a shower... mmmhh where was I again?

Nice reference to Trump!

And poor Jess' optimism is to receive a severe blow! :-(

And did I mention Becker in the shower is a very gorgeous image. Jess should definitely join him there. :-)
1/2/2016 c6 72DrawnToDarkness
How did I not know this had been posted?!

I love Becker going bright red at Abby's suggestion they get clean together! Teehee!

But no... I'm not ready for Jess to hear Lester's bad news.. Poor girl :( (Though I'm totally ready to see the others leap to her defence *ahem*Becker*ahem*)

I hope the family illness has now passed and all are starting 2016 healthy and well! xx
12/29/2015 c6 4Chloe.661
Poor Jess. Poor Lester too. He always did have a hard job in the end.

Loved the Jecker moments :D Who didn't lol? Written beautifully and I can't wait for the next chapter ;)

Hope you had a wonderful Christmas
12/27/2015 c6 33Cengiz
Well said Emily, very well said! :D

Oh dear, poor Jess, doesn't know what will come now :(

great chapter! It was worth waiting for :D and don't worry, better a late update than no update at all :D

12/3/2015 c5 Cengiz
hahaha yeah, Abby is right. knock some sense into that woman, well maybe from now on, she will believe :D

great chapter :D can't wait for the next one
11/23/2015 c5 5Prawn Crackers
Nice bit of action with Becker to the rescue...

Love Abby's sarcasm! :-)

And Jess, of course, saved the day!

Happy, happy, happy to hear that you have already written two more chapters! Yay!
11/18/2015 c5 4Chloe.661
Loved it. I really liked the joke about Beckers clothing lol.
11/18/2015 c5 72DrawnToDarkness
Ooh, lucky Tanya.. having our lovely Captain there to catch her!

Love the description of the action and their taking down of the dinosaur - and, of course, Jess being the brilliant life saver that she is!

Lovely to see a new part - you know I'm always happy to see you post!
10/16/2015 c4 DrawnToDarkness

I don't like the protester woman at all.. If you want to have Tanya eaten by a dinosaur, that's totally okay with me!

I'm on tenterhooks waiting for Jess to find out her job's at risk - my poor girl! - but am looking forward to the team's reaction to it all, too.

Love the story, m'dear! Any time you're ready to post a part is more than fine by me! I can be patient... sometimes! ;)
10/11/2015 c4 5Prawn Crackers
Paleo propaganda! LoL

Becker is way too professional to let this crazy lady be eaten - unfortunately. But then on second thought, Abby would agree that a polyester pushup bra isn't the right kind of diet for any dinosaur.

I'm happy to see our brainstorming put to such fabulous use!
10/11/2015 c4 33Cengiz
Geez, that woman. Please let her be eaten in the next chapter :D

great chapter. Can't wait for the next one :D

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