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Keep writing stories Baratta
Keep writing stories Baratta
9/11/2015 c3 Jennifer Baratta
Thank you so much for this story.
Thank you so much for this story.
9/10/2015 c3 Transylvanian
Good story so far.
Good story so far.
7/17/2015 c2 Ash M. Knight
HELL YEAH DUDE THAT ENDING ROCKED MY WORLD TOTALLY STELLAR!
Love the intensity and vividness of all this. Flashbacks were really on point.
HELL YEAH DUDE THAT ENDING ROCKED MY WORLD TOTALLY STELLAR!
Love the intensity and vividness of all this. Flashbacks were really on point.
7/17/2015 c2 
9Regina'sSass
This is an amazing chapter, you did really well and yay for the proposal! Hopefully that will give Regina some more motivation to get better xxx
9Regina'sSassThis is an amazing chapter, you did really well and yay for the proposal! Hopefully that will give Regina some more motivation to get better xxx
7/11/2015 c1 5ellacj
I really love this story so far! I love the way you get into Regina's head and show us her thoughts and her backstory, it really makes everything so much more personal and hard-hitting. I also really like how Regina was able to open up to Emma and felt safe enough to do so - I think for a character like her it's super important that she's able to be vulnerable around someone, and it's amazing how she's comfortable enough to do that with Emma. And, of course, how Emma supported her and didn't judge her; she just offered help. I can't wait to read farther!
5ellacjI really love this story so far! I love the way you get into Regina's head and show us her thoughts and her backstory, it really makes everything so much more personal and hard-hitting. I also really like how Regina was able to open up to Emma and felt safe enough to do so - I think for a character like her it's super important that she's able to be vulnerable around someone, and it's amazing how she's comfortable enough to do that with Emma. And, of course, how Emma supported her and didn't judge her; she just offered help. I can't wait to read farther!
7/5/2015 c1 9Regina'sSass
This is a great story! I love the way that you made Regina the one to be vulnerable and sick and not Emma. I'm looking forward to reading chapter 3 and to see the recovery process and the challenges that both Regina and Emma have to face.
I will point out one thing though honey; to make it easier for people to read when there is a new line of speech start a new paragraph. For example:
Emma sighs in relief,
"Can I go into her room?"
The doctors both nod and she walks past them opening the door,
"Hey honey, I'm back" she says softly.
Regina looks up, her eyes red-rimmed and her arms hugging her legs,
"Em-Emma. I'm five foot four and a half and I-I am only nine-ninety pounds. I-I need help." she says nodding finally looking up in fear and shame evident in the dark haired woman's eyes.
Emma nods and walks towards the bed,
"And we will get you that help and we will work through it"
She says nodding and with that Regina leans into her blonde haired girlfriend,
"We will work through it."
It makes it easier to tell who is saying what that way but don't worry I did the exact same thing when I first started writing. It all comes with time!
I need to heal my heart now though that was so sad but so beautifully done. You're amazing!
Regina'sSass xxx
9Regina'sSassThis is a great story! I love the way that you made Regina the one to be vulnerable and sick and not Emma. I'm looking forward to reading chapter 3 and to see the recovery process and the challenges that both Regina and Emma have to face.
I will point out one thing though honey; to make it easier for people to read when there is a new line of speech start a new paragraph. For example:
Emma sighs in relief,
"Can I go into her room?"
The doctors both nod and she walks past them opening the door,
"Hey honey, I'm back" she says softly.
Regina looks up, her eyes red-rimmed and her arms hugging her legs,
"Em-Emma. I'm five foot four and a half and I-I am only nine-ninety pounds. I-I need help." she says nodding finally looking up in fear and shame evident in the dark haired woman's eyes.
Emma nods and walks towards the bed,
"And we will get you that help and we will work through it"
She says nodding and with that Regina leans into her blonde haired girlfriend,
"We will work through it."
It makes it easier to tell who is saying what that way but don't worry I did the exact same thing when I first started writing. It all comes with time!
I need to heal my heart now though that was so sad but so beautifully done. You're amazing!
Regina'sSass xxx
7/5/2015 c1 75Wolflover007
this was so sad dearie in a good way. I don't watch the show but am glad you posted it. I like that you used the same song that i used in your request chapter about Maura Isles' eating disorder.
I probably wont keep reading as i don't know the show but best of luck kei. :)
-wolf
75Wolflover007this was so sad dearie in a good way. I don't watch the show but am glad you posted it. I like that you used the same song that i used in your request chapter about Maura Isles' eating disorder.
I probably wont keep reading as i don't know the show but best of luck kei. :)
-wolf