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2/29/2016 c1 7NoilyPrat
I like how you convey the entire picture in just dialogue - 560 words. Feel sorry for Sam, who's hurt, dehydrated, and half out of it, and lucky Dean, who's able to take care of brother. Great job!
2/23/2016 c1 30celinenaville
Awww. Love the idea of just dialogue telling us what's going on. Sounds just like them. Good job. I hate it when I see a cute little story and it has so few reviews.
12/31/2015 c1 36BlackIceWitch
Motormouth! The dialogue gave a terrific sense of Dean bustling around, mentally if not physically, his fear and doubt held back behind his teeth and the babbling covering up those expressions that would be filling his face, in direct contradiction. Very good use of dialogue for both characters, in fact, their respective states of mind were extremely vivid. Great work!
7/9/2015 c1 67CornishGirl
Dean really is self-sacrificing when it comes to his little brother. A chopper! They'll have to give *him* drugs, too, not just Sammy!

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