
4/22/2016 c2 Guest
Pleas keep writing
Pleas keep writing
4/9/2016 c1 Guest
Please make more chapters
Please make more chapters
3/2/2016 c2 Guest
Please continue
Please continue
7/8/2015 c2 Emma
I like your idea for this story . I hope for lot of bellarke moments
I like your idea for this story . I hope for lot of bellarke moments
7/8/2015 c1 Guest
You need to work on your layout, the spacing is not great, with very long paragraphs switching between people which makes for confusing reading.
You need to work on your layout, the spacing is not great, with very long paragraphs switching between people which makes for confusing reading.
7/6/2015 c1 I read not write
Ooooh! Such a good plot idea.
Fab first chapter - can't wait to read the next update :)
Ooooh! Such a good plot idea.
Fab first chapter - can't wait to read the next update :)