for Barefoot2/15 c56 BlasterDuke13
Sorry to hear that you won’t be writing more but that you so much for writing what you have. I have enjoyed this story immensely.
Sorry to hear that you won’t be writing more but that you so much for writing what you have. I have enjoyed this story immensely.
2/15 c56 ohhhdear
May your mental and physical batteries recharge rapidly. I’ve greatly enjoyed the depth and creativity, and the character development is superb. The Harry Tonks Hedwig relationship(s) were creepy and bad in far too many ways, but the way you handled Hedwig leaving was very realistic. Relationships DO end. All that said, I sure can see plot points and a bright future for Barefoot. Thanks!
May your mental and physical batteries recharge rapidly. I’ve greatly enjoyed the depth and creativity, and the character development is superb. The Harry Tonks Hedwig relationship(s) were creepy and bad in far too many ways, but the way you handled Hedwig leaving was very realistic. Relationships DO end. All that said, I sure can see plot points and a bright future for Barefoot. Thanks!
2/6 c50 Bu
So fucking tired of all you retards making your main character a weak little bitch afraid of killing. Hey retard, your enemies are written as literal murdering raping psychopaths, and you are crying about it not being the "right thing" to kill them? Fuck me, characters like this piss me off. As do writers who keep perpetuating this trash.
So fucking tired of all you retards making your main character a weak little bitch afraid of killing. Hey retard, your enemies are written as literal murdering raping psychopaths, and you are crying about it not being the "right thing" to kill them? Fuck me, characters like this piss me off. As do writers who keep perpetuating this trash.
2/5 c56 Chryseum
Honestly unspeakables are the worst people in the ministry, they control all sensitive information through assassination, threats and obliviation. They constantly research higher magics like death magic and time magic, yet when Voldemort is up and running around, they sit back and ignore wizarding Britain almost get overthrown. If the unspeakables are of any strength, the fact that they don't help Harry or even anyone in helping defeat the death eaters and Voldemort means they are scum.
Honestly unspeakables are the worst people in the ministry, they control all sensitive information through assassination, threats and obliviation. They constantly research higher magics like death magic and time magic, yet when Voldemort is up and running around, they sit back and ignore wizarding Britain almost get overthrown. If the unspeakables are of any strength, the fact that they don't help Harry or even anyone in helping defeat the death eaters and Voldemort means they are scum.
2/5 c56 TigerJacob
Yeah...this last AN leads me to believe you've been harassed not only about the tonks pairing but any semblance of polyamory. Dissapointing that it got to you and that is apparently the reason for us having more interaction/development with hermione than with the pairing choice.
It's an alright fic, I'd say my favorite takeaways were the grammar and a cooperative Dumbledore. You seem to have the RWBY writer symptoms in the early AN's, that is to say "this is a cool idea...should I add it?", metamorph, unique magic (did you get harassed about hedwig as well, explain why she doesn't show up in later chapters), unique realms, etc. But did you have a concrete plan for explaining them? The original power of pyschometry basically has him if not at Dumbledore level then beyond it, considering everyone else he's acquired. But that's only in a straight up fight and rarely will that be the case when everyone works from the shadows.
You do have a decently established villain though, how he matches harry, whether through being a dementor now or something, will probably remain to be seen years later (5 years with 100kish words is nothing to sneeze at, but you apparently just announced a hiatus)?
Kinda glad I'm not too attached to the fic, I'm a sucker for romance/relationships and got my hopes up, but your pure adventure tag is an apt description of your fic.
Still regardless of all that, I appreciate the elf scene even when I'm not writing a review tired as hell at four in the morning (this time its five in the morning). So thanks for the read.
Yeah...this last AN leads me to believe you've been harassed not only about the tonks pairing but any semblance of polyamory. Dissapointing that it got to you and that is apparently the reason for us having more interaction/development with hermione than with the pairing choice.
It's an alright fic, I'd say my favorite takeaways were the grammar and a cooperative Dumbledore. You seem to have the RWBY writer symptoms in the early AN's, that is to say "this is a cool idea...should I add it?", metamorph, unique magic (did you get harassed about hedwig as well, explain why she doesn't show up in later chapters), unique realms, etc. But did you have a concrete plan for explaining them? The original power of pyschometry basically has him if not at Dumbledore level then beyond it, considering everyone else he's acquired. But that's only in a straight up fight and rarely will that be the case when everyone works from the shadows.
You do have a decently established villain though, how he matches harry, whether through being a dementor now or something, will probably remain to be seen years later (5 years with 100kish words is nothing to sneeze at, but you apparently just announced a hiatus)?
Kinda glad I'm not too attached to the fic, I'm a sucker for romance/relationships and got my hopes up, but your pure adventure tag is an apt description of your fic.
Still regardless of all that, I appreciate the elf scene even when I'm not writing a review tired as hell at four in the morning (this time its five in the morning). So thanks for the read.
2/4 c45 TigerJacob
Magical fairy orbs don't turn owls to humans...as much as we wish them too. It was your choice to axe the relationship, I can only hope it wasn't due to the ranting of those opposed to harems or poly. The fact he's most likely going to make a lesbian snake now is just annoying. The magic is cool, the mindsets you've given the characters? Debatable.
Magical fairy orbs don't turn owls to humans...as much as we wish them too. It was your choice to axe the relationship, I can only hope it wasn't due to the ranting of those opposed to harems or poly. The fact he's most likely going to make a lesbian snake now is just annoying. The magic is cool, the mindsets you've given the characters? Debatable.
2/4 c36 TigerJacob
Okay so "not a harem" and with how you made fleur a queen bitch I'm assuming your "soft spot for her" isn't gonna cut it. What I don't understand is your take on Draco, does he have a thing for hermione and furthermore who the hell does hermione like if she isn't lesing it up with ginny like hedwig stated back when. I mean not to say Hermione only hangs out with Harry, but this is bookworm know it all, even if shes fixed her teeth and hair it's not like shes had a male admirer besides her friendship with Harry (that really didn't change till 4th year so who caught her eye)...and draco pulling a snape and just admiring but not doing anything or something?
Early chapters had hermione jealous and even constant physical expressions beyond hugs, it just seems weird that she moved on to another so abruptly with no explenation...almost like author changed intentions?
This is why I don't read AN's they contrast with reviews about the story's direction.
Okay so "not a harem" and with how you made fleur a queen bitch I'm assuming your "soft spot for her" isn't gonna cut it. What I don't understand is your take on Draco, does he have a thing for hermione and furthermore who the hell does hermione like if she isn't lesing it up with ginny like hedwig stated back when. I mean not to say Hermione only hangs out with Harry, but this is bookworm know it all, even if shes fixed her teeth and hair it's not like shes had a male admirer besides her friendship with Harry (that really didn't change till 4th year so who caught her eye)...and draco pulling a snape and just admiring but not doing anything or something?
Early chapters had hermione jealous and even constant physical expressions beyond hugs, it just seems weird that she moved on to another so abruptly with no explenation...almost like author changed intentions?
This is why I don't read AN's they contrast with reviews about the story's direction.
2/4 c27 TigerJacob
Okay so kinda harem and maybe some extras that tonks drags in for fun, I'm interested to see how you bring about that AN's description. Honestly this reminds me of for love of magic if Harry was just genuinely more upbeat. Happy for tonks though, was worried there would be angst before the get together, flom parallels had me assuming.
Okay so kinda harem and maybe some extras that tonks drags in for fun, I'm interested to see how you bring about that AN's description. Honestly this reminds me of for love of magic if Harry was just genuinely more upbeat. Happy for tonks though, was worried there would be angst before the get together, flom parallels had me assuming.
2/3 c10 TigerJacob
Gonna start off by saying you've earned a fav for the elf scene, if there is not a more heart warming elf related moment in the plethora of hp fanfiction I've read then it doesn't come to mind. It always feels like its save dobby or change the elves etc. to see a year one Harry just sit down and be a friend for one of the little ones while hes still a little one...you get the picture.
I'll probs have this binged in the next few days, admittedly I started reading it because someone said harem in the comments and I'm an unrepentant pervert. But so far the interactions between characters have been exciting and fulfilling and that just means a harem is that much more wholesome.
Gonna start off by saying you've earned a fav for the elf scene, if there is not a more heart warming elf related moment in the plethora of hp fanfiction I've read then it doesn't come to mind. It always feels like its save dobby or change the elves etc. to see a year one Harry just sit down and be a friend for one of the little ones while hes still a little one...you get the picture.
I'll probs have this binged in the next few days, admittedly I started reading it because someone said harem in the comments and I'm an unrepentant pervert. But so far the interactions between characters have been exciting and fulfilling and that just means a harem is that much more wholesome.
1/31 c26 P
Top-notch writing, unique premise, excellent story. And it's fresh. Overall it's great. Unfortunately it's taking the harem route looks like, which isn't my thing. So I'll be skipping out. Thanks for the entertainment so far though!
Top-notch writing, unique premise, excellent story. And it's fresh. Overall it's great. Unfortunately it's taking the harem route looks like, which isn't my thing. So I'll be skipping out. Thanks for the entertainment so far though!
1/29 c7 
2ChubbyQween
This chap explains about the whole 'James and Lily' instead of 'Dad and Mum' concept. Or well, it tries to. Thanks for the explanation.
2ChubbyQweenThis chap explains about the whole 'James and Lily' instead of 'Dad and Mum' concept. Or well, it tries to. Thanks for the explanation.