for Barefoot11/26 c56 Guest
One of the most peak novels I've seen
One of the most peak novels I've seen
11/19 c47 dixonjason403
annnd dumbles's world famous retarded inaction strikes again. meh, its still better than canon where the dipshit both knew nothing and did nothing to try to figure it out.
annnd dumbles's world famous retarded inaction strikes again. meh, its still better than canon where the dipshit both knew nothing and did nothing to try to figure it out.
11/19 c45 dixonjason403
this story is kinda garbage. the spelling and grammar are good, but it keeps SKIPPING everything and just vaguely telling us it happened after. theres way to much telling , and next to no showing. im honestly not surprised the story got cancelled at this point, storytelling like this is unsustainable.
this story is kinda garbage. the spelling and grammar are good, but it keeps SKIPPING everything and just vaguely telling us it happened after. theres way to much telling , and next to no showing. im honestly not surprised the story got cancelled at this point, storytelling like this is unsustainable.
11/19 c36 dixonjason403
i dont get WHY youre being so fuckin weird and vauge about the relationships. NOONE GIVES A SHIT. the story isnt about that, so just tell us or move on from it.
i dont get WHY youre being so fuckin weird and vauge about the relationships. NOONE GIVES A SHIT. the story isnt about that, so just tell us or move on from it.
11/19 c18 dixonjason403
well that was...absolute garbage. you just skipped everything, and he never talked to luna a single time. luna, who is just as weird as him and in the same goddamn house. its like you suddenly forget what good writing is.
well that was...absolute garbage. you just skipped everything, and he never talked to luna a single time. luna, who is just as weird as him and in the same goddamn house. its like you suddenly forget what good writing is.
11/19 c17 dixonjason403
i mean, no reason NOT to register when your form is something so obvious and conspicuous. if he was like a crow or something itd be easy to hide but he's a big ass wolf, it aint exactly subtle.
i mean, no reason NOT to register when your form is something so obvious and conspicuous. if he was like a crow or something itd be easy to hide but he's a big ass wolf, it aint exactly subtle.
11/19 c13 dixonjason403
i only have one wish for this story. you better make him be super good friends with luna, they can be weirdos together.
i only have one wish for this story. you better make him be super good friends with luna, they can be weirdos together.
11/19 c3 dixonjason403
even if they dont end up friends its kinda nice that he isnt a massive wizard racist and asshole right out the gate.
even if they dont end up friends its kinda nice that he isnt a massive wizard racist and asshole right out the gate.
10/22 c56 gh01
I just want to say I've spent the past 5 hours reading the entirety of this beautiful written story that you have created. I want to say thank you for producing something so thought provoking and brilliant. I have enjoyed this story immensely and hope that you return at some point to complete it. However, if you dont then I will enjoy what you have created thus far and say ado to what might be.
I just want to say I've spent the past 5 hours reading the entirety of this beautiful written story that you have created. I want to say thank you for producing something so thought provoking and brilliant. I have enjoyed this story immensely and hope that you return at some point to complete it. However, if you dont then I will enjoy what you have created thus far and say ado to what might be.
10/20 c1 Guest
Hounoku — Today at 17:18
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Worst mistake of my life
Very cute Hounoku. Very cute ;)
Fortunately I'm not some faggot gay latino or some shit skinned turd worlder as Mahogany mentioned. Imagine being one, born into a shithole family with shithole beliefs and shithole ideals its no wonder that many latinos and black niggers and slant eyed chink face Chinese could never hope to assimilate into American culture to achieve the coveted American dream. Instead I see these scum as nothing more than a waste of oxygen and as infiltrators like wannabe spies that will soon disappear when Trump gets into power. Alternatively if the author of Summoning America, Sebastian Lee were to run for President I'd vote for him in a heartbeat since in the story there are no blacks niggers gays homosexuals trannies Muzzies and Jews ruining America by staining the white genepool with their inferior genes. The only honorable brown skinned turd I respect is Peconigiri since he is helping me identify people who slander DrDoritosMD's work from afar like the cowards they are. So far I am able to determine that most of them live in the turd world and at least one lives in some shithole called Jogjakarta or some shit name its so easy to bribe with the superior dollar compared to the rupee curee fag currency they use. The Dutch should've exterminated everyone except for Peconigir's lineage because it is clear people like him and Gomrade are honorary Americans for how they carry themselves. Its okay when the Chinks led by winnie the pooh declare war we will let the turd world be exterminated by AliExpress nukes and then with the slate clean the white race can finally reclaim our lost and rightful home to expand.
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Hounoku — Today at 17:18
Guys do not say gaymar and replace the gay part with cred
Worst mistake of my life
Very cute Hounoku. Very cute ;)
Fortunately I'm not some faggot gay latino or some shit skinned turd worlder as Mahogany mentioned. Imagine being one, born into a shithole family with shithole beliefs and shithole ideals its no wonder that many latinos and black niggers and slant eyed chink face Chinese could never hope to assimilate into American culture to achieve the coveted American dream. Instead I see these scum as nothing more than a waste of oxygen and as infiltrators like wannabe spies that will soon disappear when Trump gets into power. Alternatively if the author of Summoning America, Sebastian Lee were to run for President I'd vote for him in a heartbeat since in the story there are no blacks niggers gays homosexuals trannies Muzzies and Jews ruining America by staining the white genepool with their inferior genes. The only honorable brown skinned turd I respect is Peconigiri since he is helping me identify people who slander DrDoritosMD's work from afar like the cowards they are. So far I am able to determine that most of them live in the turd world and at least one lives in some shithole called Jogjakarta or some shit name its so easy to bribe with the superior dollar compared to the rupee curee fag currency they use. The Dutch should've exterminated everyone except for Peconigir's lineage because it is clear people like him and Gomrade are honorary Americans for how they carry themselves. Its okay when the Chinks led by winnie the pooh declare war we will let the turd world be exterminated by AliExpress nukes and then with the slate clean the white race can finally reclaim our lost and rightful home to expand.
**Manifest Fantasy on Royal Road – A Step Toward Bestselling Glory!**
Hello, Fantasy Aficionados and Readers,
We’re thrilled to share some exciting news about "Manifest Fantasy," the captivating tale by the gifted DrDoritosMD! This engaging adventure is gaining traction on Royal Road, and we’d like to take a moment to reflect on its remarkable journey and promising future!
In "Manifest Fantasy," Captain Henry Donnager's modest role at Area 51 takes a surprising turn when a test inadvertently opens a portal to a realm filled with knights, magic, and political intrigue. Leading Alpha Team, he must navigate a complex web of politics and powerful sorcery while balancing his own world’s cutting-edge technology with the ancient secrets of this new land. Can they unravel the mysteries of this enchanting world before rival factions collide?
As we celebrate this exciting development, we are also pleased to announce that DrDoritosMD is on the brink of finalizing a publishing deal! This brings us one step closer to sharing "Manifest Fantasy" with an even larger audience, and we genuinely believe it has the potential to become a bestseller. With its intricate world-building, exhilarating quests, and unforgettable characters, this tale is truly one to embrace.
Join us in supporting DrDoritosMD as we look forward to a future where "Manifest Fantasy" can captivate readers around the globe. Immerse yourself in this adventure on Royal Road today, and let’s make this journey an unforgettable one together!
Happy reading!
Explore the story here: fiction/75057/manifest-fantasy?sortingoldest
Support the author through these links:
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9/27 c26 HelpmeHermione
I wouldn't have thought Hedwig as a human would be so perky. Hedwig as an owl was sharp, irritable, smart, disdainful, sassy, loyal, and a little affectionate. In many ways like a cat. This girl is bubbly, energetic, and very much like a cross between a child who has had to much sugar, and a Valley girl. To have two overly energetic women in Harry's life is a bit too much. For me, the reading goes down hill from here. I really liked the story up to this point. I read this ages ago but couldn't remember if I stopped here or finished it.
I wouldn't have thought Hedwig as a human would be so perky. Hedwig as an owl was sharp, irritable, smart, disdainful, sassy, loyal, and a little affectionate. In many ways like a cat. This girl is bubbly, energetic, and very much like a cross between a child who has had to much sugar, and a Valley girl. To have two overly energetic women in Harry's life is a bit too much. For me, the reading goes down hill from here. I really liked the story up to this point. I read this ages ago but couldn't remember if I stopped here or finished it.