
4/27/2018 c3
6Korora8
Wow, well done. I have acquired the taste of. OCs but sometimes it’s hard to find good characters with well written stories so . Are you going to have Kana find out who they really are?(powers and everything) I think that’s be interesting. Good luck with your writing!

Wow, well done. I have acquired the taste of. OCs but sometimes it’s hard to find good characters with well written stories so . Are you going to have Kana find out who they really are?(powers and everything) I think that’s be interesting. Good luck with your writing!
11/21/2015 c3 Guest
I sincerely encourage you to keep writing. You have a really good thing going here and that's rare to find. I look forward to reading more.
I sincerely encourage you to keep writing. You have a really good thing going here and that's rare to find. I look forward to reading more.
11/21/2015 c3 MissAnimeMiss
i love the last few lines at the end of this chapter! so glad you updated otherwise i would have never found this story! keep up the good work!
i love the last few lines at the end of this chapter! so glad you updated otherwise i would have never found this story! keep up the good work!
11/21/2015 c3 Loopy
This is such a beautiful story!
But i feel so much sadness from Kana. Thnak you for the update :)
This is such a beautiful story!
But i feel so much sadness from Kana. Thnak you for the update :)
10/16/2015 c2 Belbovino
I'm very interested in your story and I really really hope that you will continue someday .
I'm very interested in your story and I really really hope that you will continue someday .
9/6/2015 c2 Anon-san
I've noticed that you portray Kana as this beautiful, easy going character who always seems to be smiling and laughing at everything, but there's this hidden and subtle underlying darkness to her. Those are my favorite types of characters and if built on right it can make an amazing story. I really hope you aren't one of those writers that makes their characters fall in love in like 3 chapters and then have your OC spill all her dark secrets as soon as she falls in love with him. I really like this mystery about her and I hope you keep up the pace :)
I've noticed that you portray Kana as this beautiful, easy going character who always seems to be smiling and laughing at everything, but there's this hidden and subtle underlying darkness to her. Those are my favorite types of characters and if built on right it can make an amazing story. I really hope you aren't one of those writers that makes their characters fall in love in like 3 chapters and then have your OC spill all her dark secrets as soon as she falls in love with him. I really like this mystery about her and I hope you keep up the pace :)
9/6/2015 c2 Mikoto's Wife
OMG KANA IS SO COOL! IM SO HAPPY YOU FINALLY INTRODUCED THEM FORMALLY. AND I HOPE THEIR RELATIONSHIP WILL GROW. PLEASE UPDATE!
OMG KANA IS SO COOL! IM SO HAPPY YOU FINALLY INTRODUCED THEM FORMALLY. AND I HOPE THEIR RELATIONSHIP WILL GROW. PLEASE UPDATE!
9/6/2015 c2 ezra
literally bless u for not throwing Anna aside i love how so in depth she is portrayed into this fanfic so far and i hope you continue to do that
literally bless u for not throwing Anna aside i love how so in depth she is portrayed into this fanfic so far and i hope you continue to do that
9/6/2015 c1 Ezra
i really like how you started the story introducing anna instead of going straight to mikoto. I hope you really build on their relationship
i really like how you started the story introducing anna instead of going straight to mikoto. I hope you really build on their relationship
9/6/2015 c1 anon-san
this is actually really interesting, even tho it was only the first chapter and it wasn't much, i still really enjoyed it and can't wait to read more
this is actually really interesting, even tho it was only the first chapter and it wasn't much, i still really enjoyed it and can't wait to read more
7/29/2015 c1 Guest
Update soon
Update soon
7/19/2015 c1
7charmingchrissy1
I will agree with you that the K fandom on here is smaller than some, but it's not too terrible. You should definitely continue this, because I also believe that a fandom cannot grow without those to push it to a start. Plus, I found the beginning of your story quite intriguing and I would really like to read of these big plans you have for it. The writing was fresh and light, so you're off to a great start. Plus you seem to have some favorites and a follow and that will only grow the further along your story goes. Don't give up on this piece! I'll be waiting for the next chapter to see what happens with Kana, and of course, her life with Mikoto and HOMRA. Keep up the great work!

I will agree with you that the K fandom on here is smaller than some, but it's not too terrible. You should definitely continue this, because I also believe that a fandom cannot grow without those to push it to a start. Plus, I found the beginning of your story quite intriguing and I would really like to read of these big plans you have for it. The writing was fresh and light, so you're off to a great start. Plus you seem to have some favorites and a follow and that will only grow the further along your story goes. Don't give up on this piece! I'll be waiting for the next chapter to see what happens with Kana, and of course, her life with Mikoto and HOMRA. Keep up the great work!