for A Simple Teenage Shop Owner9/24 c18 
3Detsella Morningdew
Yeah, Naruto definitely isn't a loot goblin. I mean, despite it not fitting his style, he thought Zabuza's sword was awesome, but he used it as a grave marker. Respect for people was always more important than cool swords for him.
3Detsella MorningdewYeah, Naruto definitely isn't a loot goblin. I mean, despite it not fitting his style, he thought Zabuza's sword was awesome, but he used it as a grave marker. Respect for people was always more important than cool swords for him.
9/23 c2 Detsella Morningdew
This is enjoyable to read, but I see what you mean - there's a lot here that got rushed over that I'd really have liked to read about properly instead of a summary. I'm still reading, but yep.
This is enjoyable to read, but I see what you mean - there's a lot here that got rushed over that I'd really have liked to read about properly instead of a summary. I'm still reading, but yep.
8/9 c1 blackhulk89
one of my top ten stories ive had the privilege to read and enjoy. thank you very much
one of my top ten stories ive had the privilege to read and enjoy. thank you very much
5/26 c1 Guest
Naruto is too passive and dare I say submissive in this fic. He let's people walk all over him as if he has no self worth. Rias tried to erase his memories of the woman he loved and he let her walk away. Koneko slapped him for keeping his past from her while she was doing the same. It's not a bad fic, just not for me. I'm not interested in super simp submissive Naruto.
Naruto is too passive and dare I say submissive in this fic. He let's people walk all over him as if he has no self worth. Rias tried to erase his memories of the woman he loved and he let her walk away. Koneko slapped him for keeping his past from her while she was doing the same. It's not a bad fic, just not for me. I'm not interested in super simp submissive Naruto.
4/25 c4 Fox Sage 1
Are you going to rewrite this chapter or the story and put the lemons scenes back? Or are you going to open an AO3 account and put all of the lemons scenes there.
Are you going to rewrite this chapter or the story and put the lemons scenes back? Or are you going to open an AO3 account and put all of the lemons scenes there.
3/26 c29 Guest
w fanfic
w fanfic
3/19 c8 Its.Mitch.O
Naruto should technically be a god. He has all nine bijuu and you mentioned Kurama having the rennigan in the early chapters. True seeker orbs would be able to earse all things and they negate durability hax.
Naruto should technically be a god. He has all nine bijuu and you mentioned Kurama having the rennigan in the early chapters. True seeker orbs would be able to earse all things and they negate durability hax.