for A Simple Teenage Shop Owner4/22/2022 c8 Azreus
Naruto knows sealing right? He should find a way to seal the rest of her power or just seal her completely i mean no matter how powerful she is even Kaguya was able to be sealed away
Naruto knows sealing right? He should find a way to seal the rest of her power or just seal her completely i mean no matter how powerful she is even Kaguya was able to be sealed away
4/15/2022 c4 Hyperman15
You just committed a crime here. You don’t say “Lemon start” only to say “oh sorry I edited out the lemon” it doesn’t work like that.
You just committed a crime here. You don’t say “Lemon start” only to say “oh sorry I edited out the lemon” it doesn’t work like that.
4/8/2022 c9 majikss
he just fought opbis know he's panicked at Michael. dogshit power scaling and story
he just fought opbis know he's panicked at Michael. dogshit power scaling and story
4/2/2022 c35 
1Plasma Dragon 312
I think it makes a lot of sense that Ophis would curbstomp Cao Cao. Even with his sacred gear he’s fighting a being that is literally the personification of infinity.
1Plasma Dragon 312I think it makes a lot of sense that Ophis would curbstomp Cao Cao. Even with his sacred gear he’s fighting a being that is literally the personification of infinity.
4/1/2022 c24 Plasma Dragon 312
Naruto purifiing the earth is something I love reading about. Seeing him do something so him for no personal gain is so Naruto.
Naruto purifiing the earth is something I love reading about. Seeing him do something so him for no personal gain is so Naruto.
3/25/2022 c13 drducky
honestly this whole peaceful thing is getting annoying. WE GET IT THE OG NARTUO IS A PUSSY.
honestly this whole peaceful thing is getting annoying. WE GET IT THE OG NARTUO IS A PUSSY.
3/19/2022 c42 Undeadgamerfromhell
I was recommended this story by my friend and from your note on the first chapter it set me expectations at mundane but as much as you criticize your own work you stuck it out and did finish it and while it was somewhat fast paced in its storytelling it is probably one of the better stories I've come acrossed you kept it going you left little to no plot holes you did something here that has a certain spark to it and as I've done with many of the great stories I've come acrossed here I will tell you the same it was a amazing journey to read and it is story you should have pride in and I am grateful I got to read it do keep up the good work and never let your imagination die _
I was recommended this story by my friend and from your note on the first chapter it set me expectations at mundane but as much as you criticize your own work you stuck it out and did finish it and while it was somewhat fast paced in its storytelling it is probably one of the better stories I've come acrossed you kept it going you left little to no plot holes you did something here that has a certain spark to it and as I've done with many of the great stories I've come acrossed here I will tell you the same it was a amazing journey to read and it is story you should have pride in and I am grateful I got to read it do keep up the good work and never let your imagination die _
3/18/2022 c4 Bluenait
Why the fuck did you take out the Lemon you motherfuckeing bitch i hope you die you peace of shit and I hope you choke on cocks while you're at it. Trash fuck you
Why the fuck did you take out the Lemon you motherfuckeing bitch i hope you die you peace of shit and I hope you choke on cocks while you're at it. Trash fuck you
3/4/2022 c18 Guest
hope u are like this in real life and get stabbed and shot and just shrug it off. Fucking dumbass, pls just die
hope u are like this in real life and get stabbed and shot and just shrug it off. Fucking dumbass, pls just die
2/19/2022 c20 tsukasa30
Don't Know how i react with this end i want to laught or sympathy with, kokabael for die with such way
Don't Know how i react with this end i want to laught or sympathy with, kokabael for die with such way