for A Simple Teenage Shop Owner
15/26/2024 c1 Guest
Naruto is too passive and dare I say submissive in this fic. He let's people walk all over him as if he has no self worth. Rias tried to erase his memories of the woman he loved and he let her walk away. Koneko slapped him for keeping his past from her while she was doing the same. It's not a bad fic, just not for me. I'm not interested in super simp submissive Naruto.
Naruto is too passive and dare I say submissive in this fic. He let's people walk all over him as if he has no self worth. Rias tried to erase his memories of the woman he loved and he let her walk away. Koneko slapped him for keeping his past from her while she was doing the same. It's not a bad fic, just not for me. I'm not interested in super simp submissive Naruto.
4/25/2024 c4 Fox Sage 1
Are you going to rewrite this chapter or the story and put the lemons scenes back? Or are you going to open an AO3 account and put all of the lemons scenes there.
Are you going to rewrite this chapter or the story and put the lemons scenes back? Or are you going to open an AO3 account and put all of the lemons scenes there.
3/26/2024 c29 Guest
w fanfic
w fanfic
3/19/2024 c8 Its.Mitch.O
Naruto should technically be a god. He has all nine bijuu and you mentioned Kurama having the rennigan in the early chapters. True seeker orbs would be able to earse all things and they negate durability hax.
Naruto should technically be a god. He has all nine bijuu and you mentioned Kurama having the rennigan in the early chapters. True seeker orbs would be able to earse all things and they negate durability hax.
3/17/2024 c25 Difdi
Given they’re both nine-tailed foxes, I’m a little surprised Kurama didn’t noticeably react to Yasaka.
Given they’re both nine-tailed foxes, I’m a little surprised Kurama didn’t noticeably react to Yasaka.
3/16/2024 c18 Difdi
Yin-Yang chakra? Another way to phrase that would be Alpha-Omega chakra. And that has… implications… when it comes to Excalibur.
Yin-Yang chakra? Another way to phrase that would be Alpha-Omega chakra. And that has… implications… when it comes to Excalibur.
3/14/2024 c44 Guest
Pls next cap
Pls next cap
2/20/2024 c26 mst3ktoo
I want to see an interlude from the point of view of one of uzumaki's customers.
I want to see an interlude from the point of view of one of uzumaki's customers.