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12/9/2022 c17 1Azumigurl
This is great! I love the story and the whole plot! Please update!
3/29/2021 c1 theiya
"who is this white guy trying to be her alpha?" Lol, I laughed so hard
1/17/2021 c16 8MysticalRealmsNomad
update please! I love this!
12/27/2020 c17 Bb34
I need an update
12/27/2020 c15 Bb34
Wait two of them?
12/27/2020 c5 Bb34
。゚(TヮT)゚。.
12/27/2020 c1 Bb34
。゚(TヮT)゚。
8/27/2020 c17 1DemonWolf25
ok, im completely confused by this point I really want an update. How in the heck is Kagome a human and raptor?
8/27/2020 c5 DemonWolf25
that made me laugh so hard
5/5/2020 c17 Concerns No Hate
the story is good... it went well...until kagome was introduced to be alive with a human body with an interesting set personality but had also reincarnated onto a body of a raptor...it does not make any sense it woudve been better if the story had not strayed but had instead focused on her experience as a raptor in general...when she would have comes to terms with her harsh reality that she will forever be stuck in a raptors body with century old instinct ingraved in her dna, a fraction of human intelligience with limited capabilities such as her powers and experience towards her journey on defeating naraku... though a plus that some characters such as sesshomaru, shippo and koga are added but inuyasha...he is a half blood no matter how you see it he cannot live as long as his half brother who is a full blooded youkai inuyasha is adviced better dead for a character development on kagome in the future...also sesshomaru does not act as a concieted spoiled little brat that complains every single grain of a moment in his life...he is regal, cold, powerful, intimidating, manipulative but also understanding, caring and most of all a true alpha that cares for his pack...advice is minor editing and major story revisions.
2/24/2020 c17 1KiraReaper
please update
1/17/2020 c17 2acetwolf94
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
7/19/2019 c17 Nameless Angel 00
Hopefully you update again soon.
6/13/2019 c17 ayokona
yooo wtf is going onnnn _
5/26/2019 c17 6TekoloKuautli
You left it at the best part! I'm so confused by this delicious mystery XD
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