for Eyes on Kagome8/27/2020 c17 
1DemonWolf25
ok, im completely confused by this point I really want an update. How in the heck is Kagome a human and raptor?
1DemonWolf25ok, im completely confused by this point I really want an update. How in the heck is Kagome a human and raptor?
5/5/2020 c17 Concerns No Hate
the story is good... it went well...until kagome was introduced to be alive with a human body with an interesting set personality but had also reincarnated onto a body of a raptor...it does not make any sense it woudve been better if the story had not strayed but had instead focused on her experience as a raptor in general...when she would have comes to terms with her harsh reality that she will forever be stuck in a raptors body with century old instinct ingraved in her dna, a fraction of human intelligience with limited capabilities such as her powers and experience towards her journey on defeating naraku... though a plus that some characters such as sesshomaru, shippo and koga are added but inuyasha...he is a half blood no matter how you see it he cannot live as long as his half brother who is a full blooded youkai inuyasha is adviced better dead for a character development on kagome in the future...also sesshomaru does not act as a concieted spoiled little brat that complains every single grain of a moment in his life...he is regal, cold, powerful, intimidating, manipulative but also understanding, caring and most of all a true alpha that cares for his pack...advice is minor editing and major story revisions.
the story is good... it went well...until kagome was introduced to be alive with a human body with an interesting set personality but had also reincarnated onto a body of a raptor...it does not make any sense it woudve been better if the story had not strayed but had instead focused on her experience as a raptor in general...when she would have comes to terms with her harsh reality that she will forever be stuck in a raptors body with century old instinct ingraved in her dna, a fraction of human intelligience with limited capabilities such as her powers and experience towards her journey on defeating naraku... though a plus that some characters such as sesshomaru, shippo and koga are added but inuyasha...he is a half blood no matter how you see it he cannot live as long as his half brother who is a full blooded youkai inuyasha is adviced better dead for a character development on kagome in the future...also sesshomaru does not act as a concieted spoiled little brat that complains every single grain of a moment in his life...he is regal, cold, powerful, intimidating, manipulative but also understanding, caring and most of all a true alpha that cares for his pack...advice is minor editing and major story revisions.
5/26/2019 c17 6TekoloKuautli
You left it at the best part! I'm so confused by this delicious mystery XD
6TekoloKuautliYou left it at the best part! I'm so confused by this delicious mystery XD