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63/22 c1 bumblebee9432
great now I want an omake showing the alternate fate of Naruto being forced to do paperwork for all of eternity with hiruzen and Minato shaking Naruto and asking him why he decided to come to the "hell" of all kages lol.
great now I want an omake showing the alternate fate of Naruto being forced to do paperwork for all of eternity with hiruzen and Minato shaking Naruto and asking him why he decided to come to the "hell" of all kages lol.
2/21 c2 CoffeeAficionado1
So two things.
1. Not sure about the whole “Do you fight for Justice or watch the world burn” comment from Naruto. I would have expected him to use his sensor skills to figure it out. Technically speaking, those in the light do believe they are fighting for truth and justice. It’s more of a perception of what they believe is justice. This could be a potential trap for him.
2. That was uncalled for. Technically speaking, when he used the forbidden jutsu he WAS carried by the beautiful Shini-chan. So suck it Naruto.
Elsewise, liking the story. Hopefully you come back to it. Noticed it hasn’t been updated in a little bit.
So two things.
1. Not sure about the whole “Do you fight for Justice or watch the world burn” comment from Naruto. I would have expected him to use his sensor skills to figure it out. Technically speaking, those in the light do believe they are fighting for truth and justice. It’s more of a perception of what they believe is justice. This could be a potential trap for him.
2. That was uncalled for. Technically speaking, when he used the forbidden jutsu he WAS carried by the beautiful Shini-chan. So suck it Naruto.
Elsewise, liking the story. Hopefully you come back to it. Noticed it hasn’t been updated in a little bit.
9/4/2022 c7 marquis.shax
this story seems to be abandoned but I'd just like to point something out. I don't think it would be very difficult to convince Ivy to share Naruto as I'm almost 100% sure that it's canon that Ivy is Bi and has at the very least been in a romantic relationship with Harley
this story seems to be abandoned but I'd just like to point something out. I don't think it would be very difficult to convince Ivy to share Naruto as I'm almost 100% sure that it's canon that Ivy is Bi and has at the very least been in a romantic relationship with Harley
9/3/2022 c6 Sebastiean
Why was he even on earth two? I thought he was only sent to this earth not the entire multiverse
Why was he even on earth two? I thought he was only sent to this earth not the entire multiverse
9/3/2022 c6 Sebastiean
What was the point in having power girl know a naruto it’s really pointless and unneeded
What was the point in having power girl know a naruto it’s really pointless and unneeded
9/3/2022 c3 Sebastiean
Why did he just accept getting poisoned wtf this is stupid he’s literally doing nothing but being pathetic ffs his first hero day and all he’s doing is being stupid he had her files why would he accept a kiss wtf
Why did he just accept getting poisoned wtf this is stupid he’s literally doing nothing but being pathetic ffs his first hero day and all he’s doing is being stupid he had her files why would he accept a kiss wtf
9/3/2022 c2 kevinthegoat0304
Um yea let’s go around telling every fucking body his story because why not. Did I mention they just met? Dude you couldn’t have been more creative? That is incredibly stupid.
Um yea let’s go around telling every fucking body his story because why not. Did I mention they just met? Dude you couldn’t have been more creative? That is incredibly stupid.
7/29/2022 c7 KillerDonut
Starting to re-read some of your stories and I'm hoping to see more of your stories getting updated when you have the chance and time to do so. Keep up the good work and take care.
Starting to re-read some of your stories and I'm hoping to see more of your stories getting updated when you have the chance and time to do so. Keep up the good work and take care.
6/3/2022 c2 fautodd23
diana o wonder woman es mejor como pareja piensalo son culturas similares de gerreros
diana o wonder woman es mejor como pareja piensalo son culturas similares de gerreros
3/18/2021 c1 Nuff said
Truthfully, I kinda like some of the basic concept. Which is par for your stories, some, at least.
However, overall, I tire of the ridiculously silly amount of unrealistic reactions & actions.
That, & the lack of actual relationship & individual personality development.
It really is disappointing, because, again, some of the basic concepts for your stories are rather enjoyable, in certain respects.
That, & you seem to have ceased all activity with your written works, thus joining the rank & file of the perpetual hiatus Corps.
So sad.
Fare thee well, I hope
Truthfully, I kinda like some of the basic concept. Which is par for your stories, some, at least.
However, overall, I tire of the ridiculously silly amount of unrealistic reactions & actions.
That, & the lack of actual relationship & individual personality development.
It really is disappointing, because, again, some of the basic concepts for your stories are rather enjoyable, in certain respects.
That, & you seem to have ceased all activity with your written works, thus joining the rank & file of the perpetual hiatus Corps.
So sad.
Fare thee well, I hope
12/13/2020 c7 Curious Reader
Question. If Powergirl is Kara from Earth 2, and let's say this is Earth 52 where almost everything is the same, why isn't Kara 52 falling for Naruto like Kara 2 did. I'm not saying to add her, just wondering what was different for her not to fall for him, when history is repeating itself for everyone else he got with
Question. If Powergirl is Kara from Earth 2, and let's say this is Earth 52 where almost everything is the same, why isn't Kara 52 falling for Naruto like Kara 2 did. I'm not saying to add her, just wondering what was different for her not to fall for him, when history is repeating itself for everyone else he got with