6/13/2023 c42 3Nevaeh -Rose Malfoy
I started this story about a week ago and I kept reading hoping that it wasn’t one of those that I would grow to love but then I’d come to the last chapter before the story was truly set to end. I’m happy it was completed.
I started this story about a week ago and I kept reading hoping that it wasn’t one of those that I would grow to love but then I’d come to the last chapter before the story was truly set to end. I’m happy it was completed.
8/7/2020 c21 andrewpine
Still don't understand why they didn't apperate to the safe house are the Burrows instead of just wander around?
Where is this story going? There are so many things they could do but instead they just wander around lost in the dark. she knows where the people in the Order of Phoenix hang out why not go there?
Still don't understand why they didn't apperate to the safe house are the Burrows instead of just wander around?
Where is this story going? There are so many things they could do but instead they just wander around lost in the dark. she knows where the people in the Order of Phoenix hang out why not go there?
8/6/2020 c16 andrewpine
So what is the deal with the owl? Is it friend or for it just a curious creature?
So what is the deal with the owl? Is it friend or for it just a curious creature?
8/6/2020 c14 andrewpine
Hopefully someone is tainted by care of Crookshanks.
I wonder if the owl is a animagi. if so who is it.
I still don't know why they don't send a patronus to let people know she is alive and free
from her captors?
Will those be Narcissa's famous last words?
Hopefully someone is tainted by care of Crookshanks.
I wonder if the owl is a animagi. if so who is it.
I still don't know why they don't send a patronus to let people know she is alive and free
from her captors?
Will those be Narcissa's famous last words?
8/6/2020 c12 andrewpine
I almost pity any death eaters that they come across with all of anger that she is holding inside of her now. she would either blow them into next week or
freeze like a deer in headlights.
Why not apparate outside of Grimmauld place?
I almost pity any death eaters that they come across with all of anger that she is holding inside of her now. she would either blow them into next week or
freeze like a deer in headlights.
Why not apparate outside of Grimmauld place?
8/6/2020 c10 andrewpine
I guess being that she is underage and Tom's people probably control the ministry and could track them down she can't send a patronus to the order ?
Ptsd?
I guess being that she is underage and Tom's people probably control the ministry and could track them down she can't send a patronus to the order ?
Ptsd?
8/6/2020 c6 andrewpine
Why hasn't she tried to contact anyone like The Order or one of those idiots she had been keeping alive for years?
Why hasn't she tried to contact anyone like The Order or one of those idiots she had been keeping alive for years?
8/5/2020 c2 andrewpine
Where are the other two parts of the Golden Trio at while she lingers in the cellar ?
Why doesn't she get one of the house elves to whisk Hermione away?
Where are the other two parts of the Golden Trio at while she lingers in the cellar ?
Why doesn't she get one of the house elves to whisk Hermione away?
4/28/2020 c42 1Lesbecially
I loved it, how dark it got in some parts, and the relationship you built between Hermione and Narcissa. I read your reasoning for not making it a more romantic story, and I think it probably turned out better this way, more "real" in a way. It didn't feel like it tried to glorify war, but neither did it feel too gritty and miserable.
Thank you for a great read, dear author.
(I noticed some missing words in chapter 40 and editing misses in 41.)
I loved it, how dark it got in some parts, and the relationship you built between Hermione and Narcissa. I read your reasoning for not making it a more romantic story, and I think it probably turned out better this way, more "real" in a way. It didn't feel like it tried to glorify war, but neither did it feel too gritty and miserable.
Thank you for a great read, dear author.
(I noticed some missing words in chapter 40 and editing misses in 41.)
3/25/2020 c42 NightmareInTheShadows
I greatly lived this study and I'm very happy how it turned out. You're a great writer.
I greatly lived this study and I'm very happy how it turned out. You're a great writer.
3/25/2020 c42 JenDamn
This was an awesome story. Their relationship only really picked up at the end though, so I hope your 'maybelogue', is as thought out as the rest of this story.
This was an awesome story. Their relationship only really picked up at the end though, so I hope your 'maybelogue', is as thought out as the rest of this story.