11/20/2017 c2 Whitewolf
You're doing good I hope you do more see you in the next story young guardian .
You're doing good I hope you do more see you in the next story young guardian .
7/30/2016 c2 QueenDarkcloud
This is great. I really enjoyed it. It has a unique storyline that very few people use.
This is great. I really enjoyed it. It has a unique storyline that very few people use.
5/4/2016 c2 62Strike Faster Than Starlight
Wow that ws awesome! the only bad thing is that it was too short and left me with the i want more taste in my mouth haha, but seriously i would like to see more this is a crossover that is almost nonexist and i don't know why but this story and animegirl 144 stories made me ship jack x weiss(second favorite girl to pair with jack now just losing to elsa haha) anyways thanks for this awesome work
Wow that ws awesome! the only bad thing is that it was too short and left me with the i want more taste in my mouth haha, but seriously i would like to see more this is a crossover that is almost nonexist and i don't know why but this story and animegirl 144 stories made me ship jack x weiss(second favorite girl to pair with jack now just losing to elsa haha) anyways thanks for this awesome work
2/22/2016 c2 Goldspark1
Like the idea of them meeting. I honestly think their a good couple simply because their so opposite. One is all about perfection while the other just wants to have fun. Its a bonus the cold doesn't bother them.
Like the idea of them meeting. I honestly think their a good couple simply because their so opposite. One is all about perfection while the other just wants to have fun. Its a bonus the cold doesn't bother them.
1/29/2016 c1 Dreamer
Oops...I guess I should double check on the "author's" home page before I comment...sadly, this is not the first time I have made a wrong assumption.
Anyways, I am still interested if whoever wrote this is willing/finds inspiration to write more.
Oops...I guess I should double check on the "author's" home page before I comment...sadly, this is not the first time I have made a wrong assumption.
Anyways, I am still interested if whoever wrote this is willing/finds inspiration to write more.
1/29/2016 c2 Dreamer
I understand that this story is posted as complete. However, if you ever have a desire to maybe do a sequel or another chapter on how Jack will get back, i would be quite interested in reading it.
I really like the mirror breaking effect and how you had the two worlds collide. Thank you for posting this, and I hope I don't sound forceful/pushy.
I understand that this story is posted as complete. However, if you ever have a desire to maybe do a sequel or another chapter on how Jack will get back, i would be quite interested in reading it.
I really like the mirror breaking effect and how you had the two worlds collide. Thank you for posting this, and I hope I don't sound forceful/pushy.
8/13/2015 c2 5whitetigercub
I'm sorry you were both expecting this to be a multi-chapter. I was only intending this to be a one shot from two perspectives. sorry :(
I'm sorry you were both expecting this to be a multi-chapter. I was only intending this to be a one shot from two perspectives. sorry :(
8/13/2015 c2 Guest
Seems interesting . About time we had another rotg and rwby crossover
Seems interesting . About time we had another rotg and rwby crossover
8/11/2015 c2 113AnimeGirl 144
This was well done. Jack appearing to Weiss just after his encounter with Pitch seems like a great place to put it since Jack would be in an emotional turmoil over Pitch's attacks (the mental and emotional ones).
This was well done. Jack appearing to Weiss just after his encounter with Pitch seems like a great place to put it since Jack would be in an emotional turmoil over Pitch's attacks (the mental and emotional ones).
8/10/2015 c2 1CrackShiper
I read the first part just recently and am so happy to see that to you are continuing the story! I love what you have done so far and can't wait for more! :D
I read the first part just recently and am so happy to see that to you are continuing the story! I love what you have done so far and can't wait for more! :D
8/10/2015 c1 113AnimeGirl 144
This was beautiful. I wouldn't mind a sequel/second chapter to see it from Jack's point of view.
This was beautiful. I wouldn't mind a sequel/second chapter to see it from Jack's point of view.