Reviews: Betrayed but Not Broken

4/30 c6

82Aggro The Fire Fury
This is an amazing story! I really love this! Keep up the great work and keep being awsome!
Have an amazing day/night.
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4/8 c8 animefan8
when did ash catch hypno?

also
SERIOUSLY!? YOU STOPPED THERE!? FRIGGIN /UPDATE\\ ALREADY!

4/8 c6 animefan8
the only one that wasn't there was GIRATINA, why wasn't it!?

/UPDATE\\!

4/8 c4 animefan8
what onix!? ash NEVER CAUGHT an onix!?

ALSO, ARE YOU EVER GOING TO /UPDATE\\!

3/9 c8 winx-animeluver
keeeeeep gooooooinnnnnggg pleeeeeaaasssee! UUPPPPDDDAAATTTEEEE!

PLEASE {{{FINISH}}} YOUR {{FICS}} {{BEFORE}} STARTING A NEW ONE, THAT IS {{REALLY ANNOYING}}!

11/17/2021 c8 Guest
This is really good hope it continues whenever you have time.

8/10/2021 c8

5squirpsdolphin
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH! I believe I am obsessed. I have a problem... I keep reading and rereading this story. When you get the chance, please update cause I can't wait for the next chapter!

8/8/2021 c8 Guest
Hydreigon is 3 headed

8/8/2021 c5 Guest
Donphan can’t learn Bone Rush

3/13/2021 c8 Guest
More chapters please, also does Saoirse have any Kalos pokemon.

3/7/2021 c8 Guest
Give us the Ash versus Virgil battle.

2/20/2021 c8 TimberWolfIceRose
please make another chapter i want to find out what happens next

9/27/2020 c8 jackyfloresq2001
can't wait for the next chapter

9/10/2020 c2

1Monsterfox96
Charizard is spelled with an I in it

7/19/2020 c8 blackcute spikerose76
very interesting can't wait for the next chapter

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