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5/4/2019 c1 twisterblake2015
great start
5/28/2017 c1 Blake2020
good start
10/14/2016 c1 Liquid boss
Great story and can you make future trunks and rias a pair
7/14/2015 c1 1Super Kamehameha
Alright this is a good start but there are a few problems with this.
First of all, there are some grammar and spelling issues you need to fix.
Second, this story moves waaaaay too fast. It needs to develop further.
Third, his name is NOT Bills. It's Beerus.

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