for Arrow's Flashpoint (Being Rewritten)4/18/2020 c14 AimlessSonder
Your warnings did not mention attempted Rape. You should probably add that since I was about to stop reading. Glad Oliver arrived otherwise I would have.
Your warnings did not mention attempted Rape. You should probably add that since I was about to stop reading. Glad Oliver arrived otherwise I would have.
3/15/2020 c21 Proud Brown Mutant
Please, please, PLEASE continue this story! This is one of the few fanfics I've read on this site that are so well-written and everyone felt in-character.
Admittedly, I was a bit reluctant about the whole Sebastian-Smythe-being-Barry-Allen's-brother subplot at first, but after reading through this fic, I definitely enjoyed his role. I'd really love to see what else you could do with his character, but overall it's up to you whether you want to keep him in the story.
Please update with a new chapter ASAP! I'm eagerly anticipating what happens next...!
Please, please, PLEASE continue this story! This is one of the few fanfics I've read on this site that are so well-written and everyone felt in-character.
Admittedly, I was a bit reluctant about the whole Sebastian-Smythe-being-Barry-Allen's-brother subplot at first, but after reading through this fic, I definitely enjoyed his role. I'd really love to see what else you could do with his character, but overall it's up to you whether you want to keep him in the story.
Please update with a new chapter ASAP! I'm eagerly anticipating what happens next...!
2/11/2020 c21 
6SoraMalfoySlythern
keep oilver the arrow don't let what happen him in jail and him not telling is I'd. I thought it was a bad choice. maybe add some cartoon comics story. also I hope when they get together they stay together and not jump back and forwed I fell u should twist some things have Roy stay and such heck add the Batman world and Superman things they will never do that we would love to see happen. also Berry's brother reminds me of zoom in the flash tv
6SoraMalfoySlythernkeep oilver the arrow don't let what happen him in jail and him not telling is I'd. I thought it was a bad choice. maybe add some cartoon comics story. also I hope when they get together they stay together and not jump back and forwed I fell u should twist some things have Roy stay and such heck add the Batman world and Superman things they will never do that we would love to see happen. also Berry's brother reminds me of zoom in the flash tv
12/11/2019 c13 11milkchocolatehot64
The end of this chapter sounds like the first and/or second episode of Netflix's "V Wars".
11milkchocolatehot64The end of this chapter sounds like the first and/or second episode of Netflix's "V Wars".
11/26/2019 c21 Blackmorning
Keep Sebastian if that's what you like. This is fanfiction, we've the kings/queens of unoriginal ideas. It's how you put your own spin on it that's important and whether it goes with the story YOU want to write. Good luck!)
Keep Sebastian if that's what you like. This is fanfiction, we've the kings/queens of unoriginal ideas. It's how you put your own spin on it that's important and whether it goes with the story YOU want to write. Good luck!)
11/26/2019 c21 56BlueSweaters
Welcome back! It's good to hear from you.
Omg I would scream if you included Barry's incarceration. The crossovers were a thing of beauty, please include!
56BlueSweatersWelcome back! It's good to hear from you.
Omg I would scream if you included Barry's incarceration. The crossovers were a thing of beauty, please include!
11/26/2019 c21 1WeirdGirl369
Dude i love the Sebastian thing and I don't even like glee besides so long as something is written well I at least don't mind if it's cliche so there's my two cents but hey if you really want to get rid of it go for it this is your story.
1WeirdGirl369Dude i love the Sebastian thing and I don't even like glee besides so long as something is written well I at least don't mind if it's cliche so there's my two cents but hey if you really want to get rid of it go for it this is your story.
10/30/2019 c3 Guest
Roseanna Oliver the real black Oliver...Ummmm hell noooooo
Roseanna Oliver the real black Oliver...Ummmm hell noooooo
9/27/2018 c20 Guest
Is this still going ? Or is it on hiatus still?
Is this still going ? Or is it on hiatus still?
9/7/2017 c20 Cheyenne McCreight
Are you ever going to update this? Come on I want more!
Are you ever going to update this? Come on I want more!
7/28/2017 c20 Silvers003
Moon Shimmer Shadow Phoenix when the hell are you going to add the new chapter where you Sebastian meets Oliver? Im asking cause you haven't updated in TWO YEARS!
Moon Shimmer Shadow Phoenix when the hell are you going to add the new chapter where you Sebastian meets Oliver? Im asking cause you haven't updated in TWO YEARS!
7/27/2017 c17 Silvers003
I see want there to be a certain point in the story where Oliver kisses Sebastian thinking it was Barry and when Barry finds out she rushes to Sebastian and punches him in the face
I see want there to be a certain point in the story where Oliver kisses Sebastian thinking it was Barry and when Barry finds out she rushes to Sebastian and punches him in the face