1/20/2019 c11 ACasualHuman
I read the remake and came to get a glimpse of the maybe-future.
I like it.
Please continue with the remake *wink*
Duces!
I read the remake and came to get a glimpse of the maybe-future.
I like it.
Please continue with the remake *wink*
Duces!
8/27/2018 c10 HanaotakuR27
Please the ship will be 1827!()Maybe Lucifer can be Hibari-san you know! PLEASE 1827!I'M BEGGING YOU! (_)
Please the ship will be 1827!()Maybe Lucifer can be Hibari-san you know! PLEASE 1827!I'M BEGGING YOU! (_)
7/28/2018 c10 1Ciela Fullbuster16
What I have in mind is Tsuna falling to Kyouya, who is unsurprisingly, may be the son of Lucifer. A major plot twist
What I have in mind is Tsuna falling to Kyouya, who is unsurprisingly, may be the son of Lucifer. A major plot twist
6/12/2018 c2 Guest
I mean, I love the idea, but wow does the narrative slooooowy drags on through these starting dialogues. Also kind of creepy how she seems to spend 99% of her time isolated and think wars are fun? Feels like all kind of red flags... Idk, her position of OP beauty/power/skills wasn't something that needed to be touched upon, kind of would have been nice to save for some convenient flashbacks or mystery reveal later down the plot to spice things up!
I mean, I love the idea, but wow does the narrative slooooowy drags on through these starting dialogues. Also kind of creepy how she seems to spend 99% of her time isolated and think wars are fun? Feels like all kind of red flags... Idk, her position of OP beauty/power/skills wasn't something that needed to be touched upon, kind of would have been nice to save for some convenient flashbacks or mystery reveal later down the plot to spice things up!
2/12/2018 c2 10Eli Clark
Mist flames are Indigo. People seem to mix up Cloud and Mist flames a lot. Cloud flames are purple.
Mist flames are Indigo. People seem to mix up Cloud and Mist flames a lot. Cloud flames are purple.
4/19/2017 c8 Guest
It was good but just a tad bit short
It was good but just a tad bit short
4/19/2017 c6 Guest
TT ω TT holy God
TT ω TT holy God
4/19/2017 c4 Guest
Giotto and others were like "wut da fuk?!"
Giotto and others were like "wut da fuk?!"
4/19/2017 c1 Guest
AUTHOR-SAMA I REALLY LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUUU!
AUTHOR-SAMA I REALLY LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUUU!
3/15/2017 c10 32000kate
I really liked this story so far, even though it's not going where you thought it was. Ummm I'm not exactly an expert in writing fanfic, but it would do you good to introduce the other characters. Also, I imagine Reborn being a slight bit more sadistic, but not overly so.
Tsuna's main goal is fixing the corruption of the mafia, right? So you should be fine with sticking to canon material. Maybe the demons are playing a big role in the corruption? Idk, I just don't want you to give up on this story cuz I really like it
I really liked this story so far, even though it's not going where you thought it was. Ummm I'm not exactly an expert in writing fanfic, but it would do you good to introduce the other characters. Also, I imagine Reborn being a slight bit more sadistic, but not overly so.
Tsuna's main goal is fixing the corruption of the mafia, right? So you should be fine with sticking to canon material. Maybe the demons are playing a big role in the corruption? Idk, I just don't want you to give up on this story cuz I really like it
3/15/2017 c6 2000kate
Mamas death was so sad *tears flow like a river down my face* and those last moments with her and Tsuna were wonderfully written.
Mamas death was so sad *tears flow like a river down my face* and those last moments with her and Tsuna were wonderfully written.
1/15/2017 c10 Eriyum
Here are some emergency writing prompts.
- Does reborn and whoever he reports to know about Nana's death?
- what happened to tsuna after her mom passed away and before reborn arrived?
- is tsuna still bad at math?
- when reborn finally shoots her will she be wearing strawberry print panties or ones with Angel printed across the butt?
Haha! The plot will develop as you go. Just enjoy the funny intro phase for a while!
I hope you manage to find away around your writers block. This is a neat story!
Here are some emergency writing prompts.
- Does reborn and whoever he reports to know about Nana's death?
- what happened to tsuna after her mom passed away and before reborn arrived?
- is tsuna still bad at math?
- when reborn finally shoots her will she be wearing strawberry print panties or ones with Angel printed across the butt?
Haha! The plot will develop as you go. Just enjoy the funny intro phase for a while!
I hope you manage to find away around your writers block. This is a neat story!
12/27/2016 c10 7Ducky Devilry
You seriously do NOT know how depressing this is! I was so excited! and then you go and pull THIS on me! HaHa God I need a drink lol
Well, I hope you liked my pic of Angel!Tsuna without her wings!
Ha, I feel like I made that for no reason now! lol I hope you find more inspiration for this story!
You seriously do NOT know how depressing this is! I was so excited! and then you go and pull THIS on me! HaHa God I need a drink lol
Well, I hope you liked my pic of Angel!Tsuna without her wings!
Ha, I feel like I made that for no reason now! lol I hope you find more inspiration for this story!