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3/19/2021 c2 Starfire21111
Thank you. You made me cry.
2/11/2020 c1 vishy
Nice!
7/14/2019 c2 Guest
WAIT WHAT I-
2/13/2019 c2 12IPutOnMyHeadphonesWalking
Kay, I'm done with fanfiction. Taking a break. Done. This was one of the best fics I've read. It's up there with Reintroducing Hope and The Humanity of Spiderman. You convince yourself that it's going to be one of those fanfics where he almost dies and then comes back to get a couple of hugs and a scolding for his lack of self protection. I really thought this was one of those fics. I kept waiting for him to wake up, but he didn't. I love how you portrayed each of the Avenger's guilt and grief, especially Natasha's. It hit me so hard when you suddenly mentioned the coffin, I mean, wOw. Peter's last words, the way he died, and his last thoughts were amazing. This fic was riveting and beautiful in a haunting but realistic way. If I could choose the way that Peter would die, it would be this one. It is something that he would ABSOLUTELY do. At first I was a bit iffy about the dandelion analogy, but it worked so well in the end with the line, "The dandelion that had somehow found itself in a warzone." The image you painted was so hauntingly beautiful. This isn't one of those fics you cry over. It's one that shocks you with a sense of reality to the point of total solemnity. Peter was too young to die, but he died saving someone. That is Spiderman's legacy, and I love it. Thank you so much for this fic. I don't use my account unless I review, and I do not review often. Peter, the young and innocent boy. The boy who got excited over legos, and loved to freefall with his webs. The boy who snuck out at night just to protect. The boy who tried so hard to save everyone he loved. The boy who lost so much, but gave more. Peter, the boy who wears a mask to hide his fear and yells quips to do the same. Peter, the only superhero I like, because he was a hero when he had every reason to be a villain. This boy is now dead, never to hum his own theme song, never to do flips in the air just because he can, never to fanboy over anything sciencey or anything Avenger related, never to throw another quip, never to smile during the saddest of times. Peter Parker is dead, and I'm glad you wrote it so well. Thank you.
10/28/2018 c2 er kebbabaro
This is a bad ending euhhh(cry noise)uehh
9/9/2018 c2 Gregary Fritsch
wtfh!

how did peter die?
8/27/2018 c2 2HemlockAndy
I love the maternal relationship between Natasha and peter
5/30/2018 c2 Guest
Imm shook
5/19/2018 c2 Guest
Wow
12/4/2017 c2 Gregary Fritsch
is he gonna revive like in the comics?
7/1/2017 c2 4Hivedragon
Damn didnt expect that ending, good short there.
6/27/2017 c2 7AquaJinx
Well, I certainly didn't expect THAT ending.
5/21/2017 c2 5Giffy McWonderkin
I cried. It's beautiful.
11/25/2016 c2 5Fantasy OH YEA
This was a really feelsy FanFic and I enjoyed it so please keep up awesome work on other stories and stuff so cool beans
9/4/2016 c1 3frytrix
This is all unreadable,,, please fix the mess you call a fanfic.
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