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8/28/2015 c2 ExplodingKnuckler
Damn It, So Much Sadness, But It Was A Good Read.
8/28/2015 c1 ExplodingKnuckler
Gaaaah, My Heart :(
8/25/2015 c2 2mrg6
Oh my God, I think I almost cried(which is a compliment). I definitely would have if I wasn't in public right now. The story was short but it was still had an impact, though it would have been awesome to see the battle that led to Peters ultimate end. Regardless of that I really liked this story!
8/18/2015 c2 cabrera1234
can't believe you let peter die I thought he was going to wake up
8/18/2015 c2 victoria
wahhhhhhhhh no fare totally crying my eyes out why couldnt loki save him. very good fanfic.
8/18/2015 c2 Nachtt
well, it had potential. Good start, well written story. Can say i liked how short and prompt it was.
8/18/2015 c2 Marvelspidey
This was good... but just fanboying here... spiderman could have survived a fall like that
8/18/2015 c2 tullem
This was a really good (and sad) story! Kudos!
I hope that I will see more spiderman/avengers fics from you :)
8/17/2015 c2 1Sir Jinx Alot 666
So hes dead right? Not fake?
8/17/2015 c2 5Riolu G. Hand
... My heart had shattered and turned into dust. I can't stop crying because I really thought for so long now that Peter was going to live but no this happens. This had just killed that little hope. But overall I love this short Fanfic, it was good and I hope you write more stories in the future.
8/17/2015 c2 LuvFiction Xxxx
No! NO! No NooOooOoo
I think my heart just shattered into one million pieces!
Oh wow you can't see my but I'm tearing up! Oh my god just picture a blonde girl sitting in bed with a tear stream face because that's me right now!
Oh wow this was good but soooooo sad.
Can I make a request?! Because I loved this ending but I would have really loved to see what Natasha and the rest of the Avengers would have said/done when Peter woke up (I thought he was going to be okay) that's why I loved this I took me completely off guard. Can I ask for...
An ulturnate ending?
No?
Okay this was still great!
MORE STORIES LIKE THIS PLEASE! Fantastic!
I'm just sad it's over! :(
You're an amazing writer and I hope to read more stories by you because you're incredible!
-LFXx
8/17/2015 c2 Struggle Is Real
Lol same day I read chapter 1 and chapter 2 comes out!
8/17/2015 c2 2Deacog
I really liked it :D
8/17/2015 c1 Struggle Is Real
I really enjoyed it and found it beautiful!
8/13/2015 c1 5SeikoTuNeR
I was a bit sad that your summary said people were disappointed this wasn't a Peter/Natasha fic. Its a beautiful piece just showing off why Spidey is Marvel's flagship character. This is totally something he would do, not out of love or a sense of duty but simply because thats who he is.

Not going to lie tho, if you hadn't mention this specifically isn't a Peter/Natasha fic, its easy to mistaken it as one.
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