
4/7 c183 KnightOfHolyLight
Great job again. Several funny moments here and then one idiot aka Darkstar comes to make a mess. I wonder who will silence him or rather has to fight him could be Ned Dayne, Robert or Oberyn.
And one answer comes to matter I honestly thought settled. That Delena's husband was the one who commanded that army. That might be footnote or some real complications now that I think about it.
At least Bloodraven got more peaceful end this time.
Overall great job again and I hope that you update soon.
Great job again. Several funny moments here and then one idiot aka Darkstar comes to make a mess. I wonder who will silence him or rather has to fight him could be Ned Dayne, Robert or Oberyn.
And one answer comes to matter I honestly thought settled. That Delena's husband was the one who commanded that army. That might be footnote or some real complications now that I think about it.
At least Bloodraven got more peaceful end this time.
Overall great job again and I hope that you update soon.
4/7 c183
87X59
It was interesting to see how the updates here and archive of our own correspond.
Now I have to admit that I thought chair just made a mental link between the two Starks that sat in it. Though the rooms projecting to one another is very cool and more convenient.
Bann's innocene is just precious. Speaking of Brann I was surprised he wasn't mentioned at the wedding here. Though in thinking about it, it is easier to edit on Archive.
So House Florent has now entered Winterfell and while Alekeyne is being more practical, I wouldn't be surprised if the others declined to get their claim to the throne going.

It was interesting to see how the updates here and archive of our own correspond.
Now I have to admit that I thought chair just made a mental link between the two Starks that sat in it. Though the rooms projecting to one another is very cool and more convenient.
Bann's innocene is just precious. Speaking of Brann I was surprised he wasn't mentioned at the wedding here. Though in thinking about it, it is easier to edit on Archive.
So House Florent has now entered Winterfell and while Alekeyne is being more practical, I wouldn't be surprised if the others declined to get their claim to the throne going.
4/7 c183
93scifiromance
Will Robert wed Delena? It would secure Edric. But there are other considerations, politically, and Norcross' actions complicate things.
Brilliant chapter as always, every POV was great.
scifiromance

Will Robert wed Delena? It would secure Edric. But there are other considerations, politically, and Norcross' actions complicate things.
Brilliant chapter as always, every POV was great.
scifiromance
4/5 c181
61reader713
I hope you’re doing well
It’s been half a year since the last update
Sorry I was just rereading this story again and noticed that

I hope you’re doing well
It’s been half a year since the last update
Sorry I was just rereading this story again and noticed that
4/3 c182
1Fawkes-Pas
Hope you continue this. Too much invested now to be deprived at such a critical juncture.

Hope you continue this. Too much invested now to be deprived at such a critical juncture.
3/24 c8 OPPRESSOR OF NIGGERS
Yeah post more chapters. Feed these other nigger lovers more cope material. That's the only reason why they want to read your shit "story" after all, they don't actually want you to be happy lmao. Pathetic degenerate americans.
Yeah post more chapters. Feed these other nigger lovers more cope material. That's the only reason why they want to read your shit "story" after all, they don't actually want you to be happy lmao. Pathetic degenerate americans.
3/23 c146 deltanumber4
Definitely ignore OON, a miserable lonely person that hasn’t written a single thing themselves, and can only build themselves up by tearing other people down. A literary Karen essentially. I really hope that everything is alright in your life and that when the inspiration strikes you will continue to post more chapters.
Definitely ignore OON, a miserable lonely person that hasn’t written a single thing themselves, and can only build themselves up by tearing other people down. A literary Karen essentially. I really hope that everything is alright in your life and that when the inspiration strikes you will continue to post more chapters.
3/22 c2 OPPRESSOR OF NIGGERS
Yeah, ignore me and focus writing fanfiction to cope from your shitty life, I'm sure it'll get better lmao.
Yeah, ignore me and focus writing fanfiction to cope from your shitty life, I'm sure it'll get better lmao.
3/20 c1 smandich84
ignore the idiot OON hes not worth your time. i hope your doing alright and update soon. mysekf and alot of others have been enjoying this story ao i hope you continue
ignore the idiot OON hes not worth your time. i hope your doing alright and update soon. mysekf and alot of others have been enjoying this story ao i hope you continue
3/19 c1 OPPRESSOR OF NIGGERS
Author must be realizing how pathetic writing fanfiction is. Good. One less degenerate to worry about lmao.
Author must be realizing how pathetic writing fanfiction is. Good. One less degenerate to worry about lmao.
3/19 c1 OPPRESSOR OF NIGGERS
What kind of shit writing is this? Every single character here acts like a 21st century American. Jesus you're a shit writer.
What kind of shit writing is this? Every single character here acts like a 21st century American. Jesus you're a shit writer.