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4/1/2021 c5 Teligoth Ren
Hey, so this is awesome. I really hope you continue. I love the way you described the half dude chopping his fingers off. It was so easy to imagine. And I love the way Tsuna reacted to it. You have a real talent here. Thanks for writing. :)
12/5/2017 c5 1Shiho-Akemi
I was reading the comments and I am very much in agreement with one who said (or at least one part) that Tsu gets up without weapons and becomes a maddona ~ Although ... it would be interesting that Tsu is paired with Fon ~ and oh gods ~ If you met Mukkun and Nagi in a psychiatric hospital where you would meet the others ~ like Kyoya and Hachan?
4/19/2017 c5 Guest
Ашшш no more? I was really enjoying it such a shame
4/19/2017 c3 Guest
Heh close enough instead of the sky its a rainbow cuz of their colors
4/19/2017 c2 Guest
*Sniff* Uuuu I-I'm so *Sniff* H-happy f-for τςυηα
2/23/2017 c2 MadaraUchiha-Chan
This is really interesting, I'm excited to see where you'll take this ;3
12/20/2016 c5 idea.getthe
Stay with the story. Write about how a pstd girl live her live in a city with dangerous people. How she struggled to live through her live and her insecurity. Just imagine the end game where she has a pub of her own like a Madonna in a club. Try Playing L. A. Noire or mafia game. Try to see from how a woman live in that kind of environment without shooting a gun but just win it with pure charisma and charm.
9/1/2016 c4 3thebizarrehairtrio
Oooh~ Tsuna's healing, isn't she? Hmm, R27 is a bit overused, but still good, though I'm not sure if that would work for this story...? I think she needs someone to constantly reassure her and keep her rooted. Maybe... Fon? I don't know.
5/28/2016 c4 FEARFLUFFLY
Why would you care ? Don't you Enjoy writing ? I sure hope so because your good at it
3/26/2016 c4 2t.laurence7
Okay, that's super sad but interesting.! Is she seeing dead people or are they all in her head.? The scars and everything that happened to her makes me want to cry. T.T Is Nana going to live with her.!? That would b cool but also worrying for Nana's heart. No, nevermind. Tsuna wouldn't want others to see her paintings and sketches, right.? I wonder who she'll end up with though.? Okay, I'm rambling. I better stop myself. Lol. Thanks for the read.! It was awesomely crazy. Which is the best kind of crazy. :D Can't wait for the update.! :D
2/4/2016 c4 1maddiesanzen
I loved it please continue
12/25/2015 c4 43D.2why
hahaha this is great, but will the first generation, varia and tenth generation be in it as well?
11/2/2015 c4 BloodyDarkNaruto
love ur idea and story! is great but I wish it could be longer. I wonder when will she meet the rainbow group again. please update
10/18/2015 c3 Skull1412
Ok, Iwrote a whole , speech on not stopping the story to only figure out that I can't write 2 reviews on one chapter, which socks since I had like 80 words on my review to have you continue this story, but then again, I'm an idiot, I really don't wanna do the whole speech again, cause I'm too lazy, but to summarize the 80 words or more, don't stop your story, it's very good, and I wish I could make ideas like yours, and when you say if not enough reviews, you'll stop, sheesh, if u look at some of mine, I barely get any but I continue mine so you better continue yours, ya hear?
10/18/2015 c4 Skull1412
Update soon, it's really good so far
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