for Kyubi and Jinchuriki: Brothers in Arms10/10/2015 c4 Patriota1993
Cool. Story in which Naruto collaborate with the Kyuubi but don't go all lovle-dovley - I love it. There are not many such stories.
Cool. Story in which Naruto collaborate with the Kyuubi but don't go all lovle-dovley - I love it. There are not many such stories.
10/6/2015 c4 
33adelalovesmadara
I love this! But please stop making Hinata faint and faint again. It's not healthy for her brain to lose oxygen every time Naruto is close to her. And it was not in Manga except from the book 34. ...The third, Sarutobi Hiruzen, didn't held any serious suspicion on Naruto when he walking in his office and just...ask questions? Or he did but you didn't write it... And The third have crystal ball that let you watch people. I thought he would constantly watch Naruto because he is the village's only Jinchuuriki. Well that's all. So far, good job. Adela C. B.
33adelalovesmadaraI love this! But please stop making Hinata faint and faint again. It's not healthy for her brain to lose oxygen every time Naruto is close to her. And it was not in Manga except from the book 34. ...The third, Sarutobi Hiruzen, didn't held any serious suspicion on Naruto when he walking in his office and just...ask questions? Or he did but you didn't write it... And The third have crystal ball that let you watch people. I thought he would constantly watch Naruto because he is the village's only Jinchuuriki. Well that's all. So far, good job. Adela C. B.
8/24/2015 c4 18MRAY 4TW
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one to see him beat the sh!t out of Mizuki.
18MRAY 4TWAnother great chapter, can't wait for the next one to see him beat the sh!t out of Mizuki.
8/19/2015 c4 Guest
Awesome chapter. I really love the way you have crafted Kurama in this story.
Keep up the great work!
Awesome chapter. I really love the way you have crafted Kurama in this story.
Keep up the great work!
8/20/2015 c4 1Maail99
There's more than a few cliches here but I'll keep reading since the content is good. Try not to use cliche after cliche though, it makes the story seem repetitive because most readers have already read something like that.
1Maail99There's more than a few cliches here but I'll keep reading since the content is good. Try not to use cliche after cliche though, it makes the story seem repetitive because most readers have already read something like that.
8/19/2015 c4 2Kunoichi of the Moonlit Night
Just discovered this story today and I want to tell you how much I enjoy it :) especially all the dialogue between Naruto and the Nine Tails. I really look forward to reading chapter 5.
2Kunoichi of the Moonlit NightJust discovered this story today and I want to tell you how much I enjoy it :) especially all the dialogue between Naruto and the Nine Tails. I really look forward to reading chapter 5.
8/18/2015 c2 6Kinaki747
I have a feeling the Kyuubi Slam is gonna be a recurring thing. Should make things interesting. Also find their friendship amusing and compelling. :)
6Kinaki747I have a feeling the Kyuubi Slam is gonna be a recurring thing. Should make things interesting. Also find their friendship amusing and compelling. :)
8/18/2015 c1 Kinaki747
I am starting to love the Kyuubi slam. It's so funny and reminds me of the Maka Chop. n_n
I am starting to love the Kyuubi slam. It's so funny and reminds me of the Maka Chop. n_n
8/18/2015 c4 9Serpiente Obsidiana
Naruto Shakuton?
Kurama has Füton and Katon, if you join Füton and Katon tien you get Shakuton.
9Serpiente ObsidianaNaruto Shakuton?
Kurama has Füton and Katon, if you join Füton and Katon tien you get Shakuton.