for Operation: GZERO2/25/2016 c2 Dylan
great story!
great story!
7/30/2015 c4 
7TheMidnightAssassin
To start off, I have not watched the YouTube videos you mentioned. However, I am a fan of the freak fan fictions, and this one is no exception.
First of all, the F2P. When you used that acronym well, all I could think of was the 'F2Ps, F2Ps everywhere' meme.
Also, I like the parallel of expiration date towards the end of ch 4.
Finally, I love how ominous Heavy's dream is. It's so open ended and yet, my mind's already racing trying to figure out what it can mean! Plus, I'm trying to go through my mental index of TF2 freaks trying to guess who the laughing one and the preying one could be! The suspense!
You've done very well so far, and I can't wait for more chapters.
7TheMidnightAssassinTo start off, I have not watched the YouTube videos you mentioned. However, I am a fan of the freak fan fictions, and this one is no exception.
First of all, the F2P. When you used that acronym well, all I could think of was the 'F2Ps, F2Ps everywhere' meme.
Also, I like the parallel of expiration date towards the end of ch 4.
Finally, I love how ominous Heavy's dream is. It's so open ended and yet, my mind's already racing trying to figure out what it can mean! Plus, I'm trying to go through my mental index of TF2 freaks trying to guess who the laughing one and the preying one could be! The suspense!
You've done very well so far, and I can't wait for more chapters.
7/26/2015 c3 ArcadianSight
Absolutely love it so far. The way you write is so smooth, and I like that you have kept them in character with their time (ie. using the word 'negro' in 1971 was not exactly ... uncommon) The characterisation is good - I can't await the next chapter.
Absolutely love it so far. The way you write is so smooth, and I like that you have kept them in character with their time (ie. using the word 'negro' in 1971 was not exactly ... uncommon) The characterisation is good - I can't await the next chapter.