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11/16/2004 c7 cantlivewoutHawkMash
You are never gonna update are ya? I wanna read wat HAPPENS! HURRY!
6/1/2004 c8 cantlivewoutHawkMash
good plot gadzooks but you have got to slow the story down! everything is happening too fast! ya need more details, and LONGER CHAPTERS! plus, everything is hectic and confusing! ya need to explain things more!
2/11/2003 c8 angeleyes46
cool story. i can't wait to read the next part.
1/25/2003 c4 16darkdancer
If you'd like i'd be happy to be your beta reader
1/14/2003 c8 Raven
Noooooooooo! Continue! Fight the urge to give up! There are people counting on you! Keep writing!
1/14/2003 c8 rev
okay, I've read every chapter, some twice, and I'm still lost. What's going on? I hope yur later chapters will explain everything.
1/13/2003 c7 16Anne McSommers
seems good so far, buti want more. you need longer chapters, update less, and make the chapters longer, it is easier to read that way
1/12/2003 c1 2gadzooks
ok everyone, i didn't have time this week to write, but i'm on it. i had so much sleep to regain, and i've been too into the last few episodes that's i've completely forgotten about the computer. so i'm starting up again and a new chapter will be out soon, cheers.
1/9/2003 c6 sarah
OHMYGOD! Please put the next chapter up soon.
1/4/2003 c6 16Anne McSommers
this is getting weird, but i like it. continue.
1/3/2003 c5 Anne McSommers
cool, this seems to be getting good
12/31/2002 c5 2gadzooks
i'm so sorry i accidentally spelt a name wrong, it's diane klepper not klapper, i'm terribly sorry and it will be fixed immediatly
12/30/2002 c4 16Anne McSommers
od this story is geting good. i like the new twist.
12/28/2002 c3 2gadzooks
hi readers if you were wondering what i was trying to say in the last chapter, i was saying that i've done the spacing thing on the second and third chapters but i've gotta get to another computer to get the first chapter so it'll be revised later. thnx
12/28/2002 c3 3CassTheCurious
The plot's getting interesting, but you really need to both use spell-check and get a beta-reader.
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