for The Human In Me (REWRITE POSTED 01-02-24)4/26/2020 c5 Guest
I love this kind of Bella she's so cheerful and easy going.
I love this kind of Bella she's so cheerful and easy going.
9/20/2018 c27 Angelic3473
Please continue! I enjoy a story where Edward is not always so uptight and self-loathing. He is acting more his age. Please make Jacob's character a little less whiny and angsty. I understand he is young but being future Alpha/Chief it does not fit. He needs a bit maturity, Especially after taking care of his father. That is what I did not get with SM's Twilight version. Bella takes care of her mother and is independent/mature, Jacob takes care of his father yet he came off to me as immature and childish. Still love the books/movies.
Please continue! I enjoy a story where Edward is not always so uptight and self-loathing. He is acting more his age. Please make Jacob's character a little less whiny and angsty. I understand he is young but being future Alpha/Chief it does not fit. He needs a bit maturity, Especially after taking care of his father. That is what I did not get with SM's Twilight version. Bella takes care of her mother and is independent/mature, Jacob takes care of his father yet he came off to me as immature and childish. Still love the books/movies.
6/9/2016 c27 
5EstrellaGrace
nice update. I had no idea you were even gone because I just followed your story in the past week.
5EstrellaGracenice update. I had no idea you were even gone because I just followed your story in the past week.
6/9/2016 c27 traceybuie
I liked the chapter, even if you felt you needed yucky Jacob. :) I REALLY HATE bossy, nosey, manipulative Alice. Who cares where or when Bella and Edward want to get married? Alice isn't in THEIR relationship and has NO say in it at all. grrrr! steps off soap box... :)
I liked the chapter, even if you felt you needed yucky Jacob. :) I REALLY HATE bossy, nosey, manipulative Alice. Who cares where or when Bella and Edward want to get married? Alice isn't in THEIR relationship and has NO say in it at all. grrrr! steps off soap box... :)
6/9/2016 c27 eness
I enjoyed this chapter and thought the proposal was sweet. I was nice that Bella was able to push past her marriage worries to say yes. I really have no interest in anything that has to do with Jacob, though, but it is your story, so proceed how you see fit :)
I enjoyed this chapter and thought the proposal was sweet. I was nice that Bella was able to push past her marriage worries to say yes. I really have no interest in anything that has to do with Jacob, though, but it is your story, so proceed how you see fit :)
2/22/2016 c19 posses45
A mine is a terrible thing to waste. This is your mind at work, use it as you see fit.I love the fact that you wrote in favor of Bella, if you have read other fictions Bella is most times a door mat.
A mine is a terrible thing to waste. This is your mind at work, use it as you see fit.I love the fact that you wrote in favor of Bella, if you have read other fictions Bella is most times a door mat.
2/22/2016 c18 posses45
I hate James, I hope Bella kicks his ass. Edward should kill him, because he will try to hurt Bella again.
I hate James, I hope Bella kicks his ass. Edward should kill him, because he will try to hurt Bella again.