for The Human In Me (REWRITE POSTED 01-02-24)2/22/2016 c17 posses45
Yes this chapter is perfect. I love YOUR Edward and Bella, in fact the way you spin the Cullen's life is very interesting. Please don't change a thing, this is different, refreshing and well written.
Yes this chapter is perfect. I love YOUR Edward and Bella, in fact the way you spin the Cullen's life is very interesting. Please don't change a thing, this is different, refreshing and well written.
2/22/2016 c15 posses45
I guess we're moving on up, I wish she would be truthful, lies make stuff happen that cause people to get hurt. Nice chapter.
I guess we're moving on up, I wish she would be truthful, lies make stuff happen that cause people to get hurt. Nice chapter.
2/21/2016 c26 traceybuie
I wish that Edward didn't have to be so Oh-woe-is-me and my lost virginity. I must make Bella feel bad about her self and her own sexual desires, wants and needs now... -note sarcasm-
I wish that Edward didn't have to be so Oh-woe-is-me and my lost virginity. I must make Bella feel bad about her self and her own sexual desires, wants and needs now... -note sarcasm-
2/21/2016 c26 
2TrillionSchiffer
Question: Is she ever going to stop 'pretending to be human' so that edward can accept her as is? You know... a vampire?
Well prb not giving the title of this story, but it was just a thought.
Sorry about your laptop. We shall pray to the gods of geek squad to do a good job a better job on their second try.
2TrillionSchifferQuestion: Is she ever going to stop 'pretending to be human' so that edward can accept her as is? You know... a vampire?
Well prb not giving the title of this story, but it was just a thought.
Sorry about your laptop. We shall pray to the gods of geek squad to do a good job a better job on their second try.
12/3/2015 c20 Guest
Chapter 20 why didn't Bella just change?
Chapter 20 why didn't Bella just change?
11/29/2015 c23 csp4
"Now today marked the one month point of my punishment" Wow, that's harsh! lol I'm getting better at seeing things from Charlie's point of view when he reacts to things Bella does but it's still hard. Now if he was 'in the know' & still put Bella on restriction, I'd take my mental baseball bat to his head:)
"Now today marked the one month point of my punishment" Wow, that's harsh! lol I'm getting better at seeing things from Charlie's point of view when he reacts to things Bella does but it's still hard. Now if he was 'in the know' & still put Bella on restriction, I'd take my mental baseball bat to his head:)
11/25/2015 c24 Guest
Cute chapter! Loved it all.
Cute chapter! Loved it all.