for The Human In Me (REWRITE POSTED 01-02-24)11/25/2015 c24 traceybuie
Well lime was better than nothing. They needed to get moving. lol I'm curious about evil vicky's plans...
Well lime was better than nothing. They needed to get moving. lol I'm curious about evil vicky's plans...
11/20/2015 c19 c.karen09
They both know they are mates so why not have them admit it to each other? And lemons are always appreciated!
They both know they are mates so why not have them admit it to each other? And lemons are always appreciated!
11/13/2015 c21 csp4
Giving suggestions for a story has never been my style but you did ask::)) I speculate which is 'the forming of a theory without firm evidence'. A thought popped in my mind when I read that Edward sucked James venom out of Bella's 2 bites. If Edward swallowed rather than spit (dirty boy lol), Bella's venom is now in Edward which might affect him - change him into whatever she is since she's obviously special. I've been speculating about her specialness. Eleazar would probably have a lot to say about that. I suspect there's more to her than just being a vampire with strange & incredible powers.
Giving suggestions for a story has never been my style but you did ask::)) I speculate which is 'the forming of a theory without firm evidence'. A thought popped in my mind when I read that Edward sucked James venom out of Bella's 2 bites. If Edward swallowed rather than spit (dirty boy lol), Bella's venom is now in Edward which might affect him - change him into whatever she is since she's obviously special. I've been speculating about her specialness. Eleazar would probably have a lot to say about that. I suspect there's more to her than just being a vampire with strange & incredible powers.
11/13/2015 c20 csp4
"You just went on a date last weekend." lol that is so Charlie:) I realize that no matter what a parent says a teen will think it's stupid but canon Charlie does come up with some lame things to say::))
"(No Laurent because who cares)" lol lol lol
"You just went on a date last weekend." lol that is so Charlie:) I realize that no matter what a parent says a teen will think it's stupid but canon Charlie does come up with some lame things to say::))
"(No Laurent because who cares)" lol lol lol
11/11/2015 c22 Hikaru
I love this story I hope you update soon
I love this story I hope you update soon
11/13/2015 c16 csp4
That went well...not! lol Someone needs to put duct tape over Rosalie's mouth:( I think I understand what the voice is now. It's a gift. I had been leaning toward thinking it might be an outside influence, someone that is watching over her & giving her info. Guess not. She's mighty powerful. She can change into a human, is a shield & 'knows shit' like Peter does. I still don't know why James (?) stopped feeding & disappeared. My speculation is she might have another gift that somehow got rid of him.
That went well...not! lol Someone needs to put duct tape over Rosalie's mouth:( I think I understand what the voice is now. It's a gift. I had been leaning toward thinking it might be an outside influence, someone that is watching over her & giving her info. Guess not. She's mighty powerful. She can change into a human, is a shield & 'knows shit' like Peter does. I still don't know why James (?) stopped feeding & disappeared. My speculation is she might have another gift that somehow got rid of him.
11/13/2015 c15 csp4
["AGAIN?!" I yelled while throwing my hands up] lol lol lol This Bella is a hoot::))
["AGAIN?!" I yelled while throwing my hands up] lol lol lol This Bella is a hoot::))
11/12/2015 c14 csp4
"No heartbeat, venom, hard skin, sharp-ish teeth" Finally! I was getting thirsty myself waiting for her to go hunting::))
lol lol poor Edward! Once he can move again he will be looking for a cold shower:)
"No heartbeat, venom, hard skin, sharp-ish teeth" Finally! I was getting thirsty myself waiting for her to go hunting::))
lol lol poor Edward! Once he can move again he will be looking for a cold shower:)
11/12/2015 c11 csp4
11th chapter & I've finally gone into speculation mode. From the beginning I've been curious about the voice in her head. It could be the same voice that everyone has but I doubt it since it seems to know things Bella couldn't possibly know. I thought for a minute it might be her 'inner monster' that comes with being a vampire but unless your vampires come with genetic memories passed thru venom, it's not that either. I've got several speculations of what that voice is & can't wait to see if I even come close:)
11th chapter & I've finally gone into speculation mode. From the beginning I've been curious about the voice in her head. It could be the same voice that everyone has but I doubt it since it seems to know things Bella couldn't possibly know. I thought for a minute it might be her 'inner monster' that comes with being a vampire but unless your vampires come with genetic memories passed thru venom, it's not that either. I've got several speculations of what that voice is & can't wait to see if I even come close:)
11/12/2015 c10 csp4
["Save her the normal way. Her heart…" I stopped as I heard her heart give a few stuttering beats before stopping...] If anyone was reading this, not knowing Bella's particular background, & heard me laughing my head off, they'd think I was sick::)) Carlisle trying to start her heart is hysterical! lol lol Best part is Bella climbing out her casket during her funeral:::))) She still hasn't drank any blood tho!
Great chapter
["Save her the normal way. Her heart…" I stopped as I heard her heart give a few stuttering beats before stopping...] If anyone was reading this, not knowing Bella's particular background, & heard me laughing my head off, they'd think I was sick::)) Carlisle trying to start her heart is hysterical! lol lol Best part is Bella climbing out her casket during her funeral:::))) She still hasn't drank any blood tho!
Great chapter
11/12/2015 c9 csp4
It's amazing she was able to walk away from Tyler while he was bleeding. I'm impressed. I've actually been waiting for her to lose it since she hasn't turned off her human side & gone hunting yet. Hopefully the Cullens are around if she does lose it. I would love to be able to see their faces if she changes into a vampire in 5 seconds flat & attacks something...right in front of them::))
It's amazing she was able to walk away from Tyler while he was bleeding. I'm impressed. I've actually been waiting for her to lose it since she hasn't turned off her human side & gone hunting yet. Hopefully the Cullens are around if she does lose it. I would love to be able to see their faces if she changes into a vampire in 5 seconds flat & attacks something...right in front of them::))
11/12/2015 c4 csp4
I like how Bella has a 'Vampire for Dumbies' how-to book in her head::)) It's come in handy since her change.
I like how Bella has a 'Vampire for Dumbies' how-to book in her head::)) It's come in handy since her change.