for Mind and Heart3/26/2016 c20 Guest
Great cliffhanger, I know you are probably not updating this anymore but it was getting really good!
Great cliffhanger, I know you are probably not updating this anymore but it was getting really good!
8/25/2015 c16 
5CosmicTwilight
Stupid Sloane, not sure I'll ever get over what he did. Where are they going? Update soon!
5CosmicTwilightStupid Sloane, not sure I'll ever get over what he did. Where are they going? Update soon!
8/18/2015 c13 CosmicTwilight
This story deserves more credit than it is getting. Great job. Update soon!
This story deserves more credit than it is getting. Great job. Update soon!
8/14/2015 c13 Mountaineer83
Hey ! Good story ! Always nice to read new Alias material, so thanks for posting !
Hey ! Good story ! Always nice to read new Alias material, so thanks for posting !
7/25/2015 c6 5440
Its good... a little muddled in places where points of view change and there a few typos/grammar mistakes but overall its alright
Any reason for speech being in italics? That gets confusing when thoughts are in italics too
Its good... a little muddled in places where points of view change and there a few typos/grammar mistakes but overall its alright
Any reason for speech being in italics? That gets confusing when thoughts are in italics too