for The Pupil (Part II)9/13/2016 c1 
37Saoirse Mooney
I enjoyed this - and the other one.
(I think Caspian might find an Edmund clone more useful than me, though! ;) )
37Saoirse MooneyI enjoyed this - and the other one.
(I think Caspian might find an Edmund clone more useful than me, though! ;) )
1/15/2016 c1 7TortoisetheStoryteller
I really like how you've written these two returning to "Spare Oom", not overly grown up or overly childish. Good job in this one and in the prequel.
7TortoisetheStorytellerI really like how you've written these two returning to "Spare Oom", not overly grown up or overly childish. Good job in this one and in the prequel.
7/27/2015 c1 Guest
Oh my gosh. I love your sequel! I would even love to read more but it's perfect for where it of left too! :)
Oh my gosh. I love your sequel! I would even love to read more but it's perfect for where it of left too! :)
7/28/2015 c1 BooksAndMusicAreMyLife
Lol, this story was very enjoyable! I hope you do more Narnia stories!
Lol, this story was very enjoyable! I hope you do more Narnia stories!
7/22/2015 c1 Anon
HAHA! That's a pretty funny story! Quite enjoyable. I can certainly see Edmund doing something like this and baffling everyone!
HAHA! That's a pretty funny story! Quite enjoyable. I can certainly see Edmund doing something like this and baffling everyone!
7/20/2015 c1 Rheta
Just love your stories about the pupil, please continue some more. With both brothers talking like kings it would be a interesting school experience.(Grin)
Just love your stories about the pupil, please continue some more. With both brothers talking like kings it would be a interesting school experience.(Grin)