for Blessed Child of Mine10/30/2020 c3 dianille
Whut? So did Gyokuen still want to kill her eldest child. I mean it was mentioned that she was ecstatic when he captured a dungeon...
Whut? So did Gyokuen still want to kill her eldest child. I mean it was mentioned that she was ecstatic when he captured a dungeon...
1/31/2020 c4 Just JD is fine
This really changed the canon events. I hope you update sometimes and maybe try Hakuren, Kouen, Judar or Hakuryuu’s POV
I just realized that all the POVs shown, other than Gyokumei’s were of people who ended up dying. Is this gonna be a pattern?
This really changed the canon events. I hope you update sometimes and maybe try Hakuren, Kouen, Judar or Hakuryuu’s POV
I just realized that all the POVs shown, other than Gyokumei’s were of people who ended up dying. Is this gonna be a pattern?
10/20/2018 c4 L
Update
Update
9/11/2018 c2 thanzintay.2000
Actually, they call them birds in magi even though they look like butterfly. So you are right in a way.
Actually, they call them birds in magi even though they look like butterfly. So you are right in a way.
3/21/2018 c4 moonlight phonex101
I can’t believe you just left me hanging like that docnsndnsownd It’d be nice to see how Judar changes because of Gyokumei being such a large part of his life! CNt wait for the next chapter!
I can’t believe you just left me hanging like that docnsndnsownd It’d be nice to see how Judar changes because of Gyokumei being such a large part of his life! CNt wait for the next chapter!
3/7/2018 c4 
3The Richmaster
This is a really interesting story; Magi isn't something I know particularly well but I feel that you've done a good job of capturing the emotional impact that growing up in such a situation might have on people.
The politics and subterfuge felt extremely well written in how many layers there seem to be with each action taken.
Though the part that I respect the most was how you showed the way that relationships between family members can strain and change over the years.
overall, I think the chapter I enjoyed the most was Hakutoku's due to intricacies involved in his relationship with Gyokuen and the way he interacts with his children.
I look forward to seeing what might happen next.
3The RichmasterThis is a really interesting story; Magi isn't something I know particularly well but I feel that you've done a good job of capturing the emotional impact that growing up in such a situation might have on people.
The politics and subterfuge felt extremely well written in how many layers there seem to be with each action taken.
Though the part that I respect the most was how you showed the way that relationships between family members can strain and change over the years.
overall, I think the chapter I enjoyed the most was Hakutoku's due to intricacies involved in his relationship with Gyokuen and the way he interacts with his children.
I look forward to seeing what might happen next.