for The Pokeninja, Adventures of the Maelstrom pokemon5/8 c34 Casey
I'm really looking forward to seeing the next chapters of this fanfic and great job on the story
I'm really looking forward to seeing the next chapters of this fanfic and great job on the story
122/2 c3 Argo Devilian
character dialogue feels stale and lacks a lot of emotion imo. not really sure how to word it lol.
and nobody is surprised about the fact that Naruto talked? or did the shock value go down after Meowth
character dialogue feels stale and lacks a lot of emotion imo. not really sure how to word it lol.
and nobody is surprised about the fact that Naruto talked? or did the shock value go down after Meowth
11/30/2021 c1 Guest
Yes thanks for the hard work that your putting in hope you continue
Yes thanks for the hard work that your putting in hope you continue
11/4/2021 c34 Guest
Great chapter and thank you for updating this I hope you update your other NarutoxPokemon crossover next. For the pokemon ash should capture next plus Naruto's harem I would suggest...
Pokemon Ash should capture next: Shiny(*)
Kanto: Vulpix*, Growlithe*, Aerodactyl, Scyther, Hitmonchan, Ryhorn, Onix*, Magnemite, Kabuto, Shellder, Seel, Abra*, Zubat, Ekans, Meowth, Venonat, Vaporeon, Flareon, Jolteon, Horsea*, Nidoran* (female), Ponyta
Johto: Stantler, Houndour, Misdreavus, Murkrow, Sneasel, Swinub*, Umbreon, Larvitar, Skarmory, Teddiursa, Sentret, Elekid, Magby, Snubbull
Hoenn: Bagon*, Beldum*, Aron, Mawile, Electrike, Poochyena, Numel, Trapinch, Anorith, Zangoose*, Seviper, Spheal, Feebas*, Duskull, Tropius, Carvannah, Azurill, Solrock, Lunatone, Sableye, Seedot
Sinnoh: Skorupi, Hippopotas, Croagunk*, Leafeon, Cranidos, Shieldon, Spiritomb, Shinx*, Stunky, Snover, Froslass
Unova: Gothita*, Deino*, Golett, Axew*, Sawk*, Throh, Bouffalant, Litwick, Purrloin*, Lillipup, Deerling, Blitzle*, Rufflet, Pawniard*, Venipede, Cryoganal*, Tirtouga, Archen
Kalos: Skiddo, Litleo* (male and female), Furfrou, Clauncher, Spritzee, Honedge*, Phantump*, Tyrunt, Amaura*, Skrelp, Helioptile*, Bergmite, Espurr
Alola: Popplio*, Jangmo-o*, Dhelmise, Salandit (female), Aloan Marowak, Yungoose, Crabrawler, Wimpod, Dewpider, Drampa, Aloan Vulpix*, Aloan Sandshrew
Galar: Grookey*, Scorbunny*, Chewtle*, Galarian Zigzagoon, Yamper*, Silicobra, Impidimp, Galarian Slowpoke, Kubfu, Galarian Darumaka, Rookidee, Wooloo, Nickit, Dreepy, Duraludon, Applin, Sizzlepede, Rolycoly, Galarian Ponyta, Falinks
Legendary: Kantonian Birds, Galarian Birds, Cresselia, Lugia, Ho-oh, Mewtwo, Cobalion, Terrakion, Virizon, Zekrom, Reshiram, Raikou, Entei, Suicune, Tapu Fini, Zacian, Zamazenta, Eon Duo, Solgaleo, Lunala, Xernas
Myhtical: Darkrai, Magearna, Zeraora, Zarude, Genesect, Keldeo, Volcanion, Deoxys, Mew
Ultra Beast: Pheramosa, Buzzwole, Stakataka, Kartana, Celesteela, Xurkitree
Naruto's harem:
Galarian Rapidash
Mightyena
Magearna
Kantonian Rapidash
Primarina*
Meowstic*
Pyroar*
Mawile
Zacian
Pheramosa
Aloan Ninetails*
Gothitelle
Mismagius
Azumarill*
Froslass
Leafeon
Vaporeon
Umbreon
Furret
Cresselia
Milotic*
Aurorus*
Aromatisse
Tapu Fini
These are my updated suggestions but again it's just me. Keep up the great work.
Great chapter and thank you for updating this I hope you update your other NarutoxPokemon crossover next. For the pokemon ash should capture next plus Naruto's harem I would suggest...
Pokemon Ash should capture next: Shiny(*)
Kanto: Vulpix*, Growlithe*, Aerodactyl, Scyther, Hitmonchan, Ryhorn, Onix*, Magnemite, Kabuto, Shellder, Seel, Abra*, Zubat, Ekans, Meowth, Venonat, Vaporeon, Flareon, Jolteon, Horsea*, Nidoran* (female), Ponyta
Johto: Stantler, Houndour, Misdreavus, Murkrow, Sneasel, Swinub*, Umbreon, Larvitar, Skarmory, Teddiursa, Sentret, Elekid, Magby, Snubbull
Hoenn: Bagon*, Beldum*, Aron, Mawile, Electrike, Poochyena, Numel, Trapinch, Anorith, Zangoose*, Seviper, Spheal, Feebas*, Duskull, Tropius, Carvannah, Azurill, Solrock, Lunatone, Sableye, Seedot
Sinnoh: Skorupi, Hippopotas, Croagunk*, Leafeon, Cranidos, Shieldon, Spiritomb, Shinx*, Stunky, Snover, Froslass
Unova: Gothita*, Deino*, Golett, Axew*, Sawk*, Throh, Bouffalant, Litwick, Purrloin*, Lillipup, Deerling, Blitzle*, Rufflet, Pawniard*, Venipede, Cryoganal*, Tirtouga, Archen
Kalos: Skiddo, Litleo* (male and female), Furfrou, Clauncher, Spritzee, Honedge*, Phantump*, Tyrunt, Amaura*, Skrelp, Helioptile*, Bergmite, Espurr
Alola: Popplio*, Jangmo-o*, Dhelmise, Salandit (female), Aloan Marowak, Yungoose, Crabrawler, Wimpod, Dewpider, Drampa, Aloan Vulpix*, Aloan Sandshrew
Galar: Grookey*, Scorbunny*, Chewtle*, Galarian Zigzagoon, Yamper*, Silicobra, Impidimp, Galarian Slowpoke, Kubfu, Galarian Darumaka, Rookidee, Wooloo, Nickit, Dreepy, Duraludon, Applin, Sizzlepede, Rolycoly, Galarian Ponyta, Falinks
Legendary: Kantonian Birds, Galarian Birds, Cresselia, Lugia, Ho-oh, Mewtwo, Cobalion, Terrakion, Virizon, Zekrom, Reshiram, Raikou, Entei, Suicune, Tapu Fini, Zacian, Zamazenta, Eon Duo, Solgaleo, Lunala, Xernas
Myhtical: Darkrai, Magearna, Zeraora, Zarude, Genesect, Keldeo, Volcanion, Deoxys, Mew
Ultra Beast: Pheramosa, Buzzwole, Stakataka, Kartana, Celesteela, Xurkitree
Naruto's harem:
Galarian Rapidash
Mightyena
Magearna
Kantonian Rapidash
Primarina*
Meowstic*
Pyroar*
Mawile
Zacian
Pheramosa
Aloan Ninetails*
Gothitelle
Mismagius
Azumarill*
Froslass
Leafeon
Vaporeon
Umbreon
Furret
Cresselia
Milotic*
Aurorus*
Aromatisse
Tapu Fini
These are my updated suggestions but again it's just me. Keep up the great work.
11/6/2021 c34 Insitreader
I love the store and what you are doing I personally love the XY Season and can’t what till you get there I hope you keep it up black and White weren’t my favorite season but you are making it deter at lest in my prospective.
I love the store and what you are doing I personally love the XY Season and can’t what till you get there I hope you keep it up black and White weren’t my favorite season but you are making it deter at lest in my prospective.
11/4/2021 c34 djinn
great new chapter, good luck in future updates.
great new chapter, good luck in future updates.
11/3/2021 c33 Guest
Please another chapter please please
All a part from that good job and excited to see more
Please another chapter please please
All a part from that good job and excited to see more
11/3/2021 c33 Gest
Very happy that some one is doing thins and hope you keep up the good work
Very happy that some one is doing thins and hope you keep up the good work
11/5/2021 c34 redmen6blight
Enjoy this one there is very few "insert character"becomes a pokemon let alone a decently done oc one. Interested to see where this goes its the only one of these that has updated recently. So thanks for continuing also have to say your harem choices aren't question I have is will Naruto have a dragon type form or what types are you actually planning on using?Is ground type an option?
Enjoy this one there is very few "insert character"becomes a pokemon let alone a decently done oc one. Interested to see where this goes its the only one of these that has updated recently. So thanks for continuing also have to say your harem choices aren't question I have is will Naruto have a dragon type form or what types are you actually planning on using?Is ground type an option?