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10/14/2021 c1 2Detsella Morningdew
Oh... well, good luck with this story, I do mean it, but I don't think I'll read it. The premise sounded super interesting (Naruto enters the Pokemon world as a strangely-colored Ninetales), and even the "Naruto can use lots of different elements" is interesting in the context of Pokemon, but Naruto transforming basically into an entire Pokemon team, and that Pokemon team isn't even made up of actual Pokemon from the games?

While I can certainly see the appeal, I was hoping for "Naruto deals with living as a fox in a form that most humans consider beneath them" or even just "Naruto has fun battling as a Pokemon and finds human/Pokemon friendship, but has trouble adjusting." Not a "Naruto gets tons of powers and abilities."

Well, an OP Naruto is fine, but the abilities don't even seem to match the fox theme. (Seriously, if you wanted tons of elements and a fox theme, the Eevee line is *right there.*)

I do hope you do well with this story, and I certainly won't go so far as to say that people shouldn't read it, I was just expressing my disappointment, because the initial premise I read was so good, then I found that it wasn't what I expected.
9/20/2021 c1 ndjjdjsujsj
I was intrigued by the concept of Naruto as a human, imagining him to be living like kurama for a while. A Pokemon harem is all kinds of sad
8/24/2021 c33 12daleaaronallen82
will Ash Ketchum gets his own Harem of Girls?
8/6/2021 c1 SparkySparkpaw
can't wait for the next chapter
8/1/2021 c33 HZ-EL PEPE
Que sea Gardevoir Shiny
7/27/2021 c33 8Lukepace414
I saw the harem in this chapter that got me confused. Is Naruto going to have a relationship with Serena's Sylveon or a different Sylveon?
7/18/2021 c3 4kingsj10
Just reading this is hilarious, 10 minutes in his new form he's taking on legendaries and moving perfectly as well. Man this naruto is soo fricking good. You really don't need
7/2/2021 c33 Guest
Awesome work on this chapter and the battle. And I really hope to see many more moments between Naruto and Snivy, along with the rest of his future harem, though I know things like that take time, so I'd rather not rush it. I look forward to how Naruto might respond to Skyla and her "battles", maybe he'll take part in Ash's battle against her, and use Gale Mode to beat her at her own specialty? Just a guess at the top of my head. I'm also really looking forward to Naruto finally meeting Meloetta, I know it's still a little far off, but I'm still excited.

I also want to suggest some additional pokemon (all of them female) for the harem. I apologize if this annoys you, and I really tried my best to make the list as small as possible, but it's still a little big.

Tapu Lele
Tapu Fini
Pheromosa
Florges
Alolan Ninetales
Lurantis
Leavanny
Hatterene
Lopunny
Primarina
Mismagius
Tsareena
Froslass
Roserade

On a side note, in regards to the harem, I think it might be best for the listed pokemon to either - (1. Not belong to other trainers, or be overall free (like the Legendary/Mythical Pokémon), or (2. Be caught by Ash himself so that the harem pokemon can be with Naruto, and avoid being caught by anyone else.
I think this might be the best way for Naruto to have a good relationship with his harem. You yourself probably already thought of this, and I am sorry if I'm accidentally repeating something someone else talked to you about, but I still wanted to share my own thoughts on this, so I hope it's not too much trouble.
6/23/2021 c1 Natsworthy
love your story man! hope you update this!
5/23/2021 c33 Ultrautahraptor
Tank you dude I been reading this fanfic since it came out tanks for the chapter and I'm happy seeing that you are not given up on this fanfic give up whit the good work.

Ps. will there be lemons?
5/15/2021 c33 xxPercyRoxxx
Love the story and can’t wait to read more
4/29/2021 c33 86KristinalUzumakiPrime23
when is the next chapter coming out, this is getting good.
4/15/2021 c33 Zapster45
Can't wait for the next chapter
4/1/2021 c33 powermachine79
Looking forward to reading more :-)
4/1/2021 c33 RockinJRK
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please COMPLETE THE BOOK.
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