for Fates Be Changed12/4/2023 c24 
2GBLplays
Honestly, I already expected this to happen (many stories of the same style end up having the same problem), but after the Hogwarts arc started, the quality of the story plummeted...
The plot lost any trace of tension, the coherence of some parts (like Mateo's determination to kill Voldemort, which came completely out of nowhere) went to waste, the interactions became poorer, the personality of some characters took a downward turn ( like Tony's reaction to magic, Bruce's reaction to learning Mateo's past and the fact that Mateo wanted to go to Hogwarts, and it was basically insinuated that Mateo would have to get involved in a war, what kind of father would allow that ?)...
Simply put, it reached a point where it became inedible, so I say goodbye here!
:)
Ps: For the girl who reviewed the term "Oriental" being used for Cho Chang, know that Asians still use the term "Western" to address people from Western countries, so try not to be prejudiced used on both sides...
2GBLplaysHonestly, I already expected this to happen (many stories of the same style end up having the same problem), but after the Hogwarts arc started, the quality of the story plummeted...
The plot lost any trace of tension, the coherence of some parts (like Mateo's determination to kill Voldemort, which came completely out of nowhere) went to waste, the interactions became poorer, the personality of some characters took a downward turn ( like Tony's reaction to magic, Bruce's reaction to learning Mateo's past and the fact that Mateo wanted to go to Hogwarts, and it was basically insinuated that Mateo would have to get involved in a war, what kind of father would allow that ?)...
Simply put, it reached a point where it became inedible, so I say goodbye here!
:)
Ps: For the girl who reviewed the term "Oriental" being used for Cho Chang, know that Asians still use the term "Western" to address people from Western countries, so try not to be prejudiced used on both sides...
9/28/2023 c23 tfuinsah
Yep, swastika good, Harry not Nazi. Funny how the Nazi's stole another culture's symbol and used it to signal their oneness and purity.
Yep, swastika good, Harry not Nazi. Funny how the Nazi's stole another culture's symbol and used it to signal their oneness and purity.
9/28/2023 c22 tfuinsah
Honestly, they only have Dumledore's word that Hogwarts is the best magic school. He's the headmaster! Of course he's going to say they're the best! He can hardly dissuade them can he? They haven't even double checked his words either.
Honestly, they only have Dumledore's word that Hogwarts is the best magic school. He's the headmaster! Of course he's going to say they're the best! He can hardly dissuade them can he? They haven't even double checked his words either.
9/27/2023 c19 tfuinsah
I would've thought Tony with all his brilliance would be able to make a human mask, one that imitates human features to disguise someone. Make up does that fairly well, a genius like Tony should be able to do much better with some effort.
I would've thought Tony with all his brilliance would be able to make a human mask, one that imitates human features to disguise someone. Make up does that fairly well, a genius like Tony should be able to do much better with some effort.
9/25/2023 c26 Abyssalwhale
He was able to do this in canon after never even touching or flying at all. Till went to Hogwarts.
It's only natural that he would be even better after literally being trained by actual super heroes. And having actual experience in flying.
This isn't you making him anything. This is how it would naturally progress if harry potter was being raised and trained by literal super heroes.
Instead of just being a poor abused tiny malnourished kid that lived in a cupboard for most of his life.
Like his flying skill is canon. With a shitty upbring. He's not an overpowered character or anything.
If anything he's still too weak to be in the avengers universe. With world ending catastrophes around every corner.
I do hope he learns sorcery as well eventually. That would be cool.
I see it a lot in harry potter marvel crossovers.
He was able to do this in canon after never even touching or flying at all. Till went to Hogwarts.
It's only natural that he would be even better after literally being trained by actual super heroes. And having actual experience in flying.
This isn't you making him anything. This is how it would naturally progress if harry potter was being raised and trained by literal super heroes.
Instead of just being a poor abused tiny malnourished kid that lived in a cupboard for most of his life.
Like his flying skill is canon. With a shitty upbring. He's not an overpowered character or anything.
If anything he's still too weak to be in the avengers universe. With world ending catastrophes around every corner.
I do hope he learns sorcery as well eventually. That would be cool.
I see it a lot in harry potter marvel crossovers.
9/6/2023 c69 Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God
Besides the Sherlock stuff this novel was rather interesting, shame about Fleur and the lack of a proper conclusion to Loki becoming MC's father though.
Besides the Sherlock stuff this novel was rather interesting, shame about Fleur and the lack of a proper conclusion to Loki becoming MC's father though.
9/6/2023 c55 Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God
What happened to the oath McG took? She's casually talking about his real parents to Snape and Sprout who should not know, did the author really change at some point after the time skip?
What happened to the oath McG took? She's casually talking about his real parents to Snape and Sprout who should not know, did the author really change at some point after the time skip?
9/6/2023 c53 Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God
Ever since the timeskip it feels like a different author took over and the story has taken a massive dive since, the whole Sherlock thing is out of place and boring.
Ever since the timeskip it feels like a different author took over and the story has taken a massive dive since, the whole Sherlock thing is out of place and boring.
9/6/2023 c50 Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God
Ten months huh? Sirius might have been kissed by now then.
Ten months huh? Sirius might have been kissed by now then.
9/6/2023 c40 Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God
Seems kind of foolish having him not know that he can talk to snakes, the guy literally spent years in India and other countries that have many of them, and he was practically living and travelling through the middle of nowhere going from destination to destination so he would have come across them before, he's also been to a Zoo at least once in this story so the idea that he has never seen or heard a snake before is pretty absurd.
Seems kind of foolish having him not know that he can talk to snakes, the guy literally spent years in India and other countries that have many of them, and he was practically living and travelling through the middle of nowhere going from destination to destination so he would have come across them before, he's also been to a Zoo at least once in this story so the idea that he has never seen or heard a snake before is pretty absurd.
9/5/2023 c5 Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God
Shame, it's nice seeing Dumbledore get a bashing, the guy is a supporter of child abuse and regularly endangers a school full of children, usually using them as bait for murderers so for me that is the very definition of 'evil'.
Shame, it's nice seeing Dumbledore get a bashing, the guy is a supporter of child abuse and regularly endangers a school full of children, usually using them as bait for murderers so for me that is the very definition of 'evil'.
8/30/2023 c37 Samwise Pevensie
Nice to have Mateo be able to deal with the past without being unkind afterwards.
Nice to have Mateo be able to deal with the past without being unkind afterwards.